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November 2020: Several times over the years, detailed conversations have occurred on this talk page about whether an editor has a WP:COI with respect to editing this page if the editor is a member of the Knights. This is a summary of the points made. This section was developed in order to avoid a certain Groundhog Day-ish aura surrounding the question of whether a Knight has a COI. The (always defeasible) consensus as of November 2020 is that being a member of the Knights is not a COI for editing this page. Here are the three main points.
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Named for Christopher Columbus
[edit]Although the article says the anchor in their logo represents Christopher Columbus, the article doesn't explicitly mention that the group is named in his honor and why. --Mr. Lance E Sloan (talk) 16:08, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
Curious about the trade-off between updated/current numbers and self-publishing
[edit]This article (and a lot of other long articles about organizations) reports a variety of numbers about the organization. These are numbers that presumably change every year. Sometimes an RSS will write an article reporting on a number. But then it can happen that no other RSS feels any particular reason (I would gather) to write an article that reports on this or that number. Then as editors, we would experience a trade-off between having an obviously old number (to the eyes of a reader) versus reporting on an updated version of the number, based on what the organization itself has to say for itself. If anyone has any accumulated wisdom on how that trade-off is usually handled, I'd be curious to see what it says. Novellasyes (talk) 14:46, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
- Or have none, as, if RS do not care why should we (see wp:undue). As (arguably) its puffery.Slatersteven (talk) 14:49, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
- It's a trade-off. I picked at random Center for American Progress and there's a lot of numbers in there that some editor carefully curated into the article years ago that are far out of date. These seem like good things to have numbers on and at some point, an RSS thought so too. Example: "Generation Progress was launched in February 2005 as "the youth arm of the Center for American Progress". According to the organization, Generation Progress partners with over a million millennials." If the Center for American Progress lists an updated number of members of that initiative, I think it's a good trade-off to list the updated numbers, even if it is self-published. I am mostly wondering if this trade-offs discussion has been held amongst editors (I've looked around and can't find it but that surely doesn't mean it doesn't exist)." This article Bank of America in the infobox lists a number of key data points that are self-published. It might be that a good trade-off is "does this number represent some key aspect of the company" so it is a number we'd want readers to have the updated figures on. Novellasyes (talk) 16:00, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
- As I said, it always strikes me as a bit of puffery, with no real encyclopedic value. Slatersteven (talk) 16:05, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
- I've always thought of these numbers as WP:PROMOTIONAL, because the larger the numbers, the more popular/successful/etc. the organization, (and political organizations like to inflate their numbers to make it sound like more people support their cause and therefore they should be listened to in policy decisions) and I generally have argued not to include them, but in the space of churches, I somewhat lost that argument, but with the caveat that these numbers are carefully ATTRIBUTED. Something to the effect of: "Church X in 2023 reported having Y number of regular attendees." Not stating it as verified fact. That said, real members might be listed, but an organization's website visitors or email list subscribers is CLEARLY WP:UNDUE promotional trivia. ---Avatar317(talk) 23:30, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
- It's a trade-off. I picked at random Center for American Progress and there's a lot of numbers in there that some editor carefully curated into the article years ago that are far out of date. These seem like good things to have numbers on and at some point, an RSS thought so too. Example: "Generation Progress was launched in February 2005 as "the youth arm of the Center for American Progress". According to the organization, Generation Progress partners with over a million millennials." If the Center for American Progress lists an updated number of members of that initiative, I think it's a good trade-off to list the updated numbers, even if it is self-published. I am mostly wondering if this trade-offs discussion has been held amongst editors (I've looked around and can't find it but that surely doesn't mean it doesn't exist)." This article Bank of America in the infobox lists a number of key data points that are self-published. It might be that a good trade-off is "does this number represent some key aspect of the company" so it is a number we'd want readers to have the updated figures on. Novellasyes (talk) 16:00, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
Infobox Overhaul
[edit]The Knights of Columbus is foremost an insurance company, followed by lesser, it being a Catholic organization and not the other way around. Please see: Infobox company Twillisjr (talk) 14:56, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- Is that in fact true? Slatersteven (talk) 15:00, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- If,
* Catholicism is based on worshipping God * God calls his servants to expel resources to aid those in MOST need * Gods Servant creates an organization for added servants to join * A disabled servant joins, and must pay double for the same benefit based on the limitation
Is this God, or is this Insurance? To me it’s hypocritical all around, but I’ll settle for calling it insurance. Twillisjr (talk) 15:12, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe to you, but that is wp:or how do RS describe them? Slatersteven (talk) 15:16, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
The deception lies in the idea that Underwriting rules are different. Rejection, Pricing, and the like… are man made tangible ideas and bear fruit for the rich, while simultaneously robbing the poor. Twillisjr (talk) 15:22, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- What has this do do with anything? Slatersteven (talk) 15:44, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- If the article was balanced (which it is not), it would be an insurance company. Twillisjr (talk) 16:16, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- Then produce an RS that says it is primarily an insurance company. Slatersteven (talk) 16:42, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- If the article was balanced (which it is not), it would be an insurance company. Twillisjr (talk) 16:16, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- Like all companies, an SEC Filing: https://www.sec.gov/edgar/browse/?CIK=0001688666
Twillisjr (talk) 17:02, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- Read wp:primary and this is "Knights of Columbus Asset Advisors LLC" (also that is assets management, not insurance) not https://www.kofc.org/en//index.html. Slatersteven (talk) 17:14, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
Recent history/Massimo Faggioli
[edit]In the History#Recent history section, there's an opening sentence citing some commentary by Massimo Faggioli. This same sentence appears within the History of the Knights of Columbus article and I asked on that article's talk page about it. If any editors of this article have thoughts about that, would you mind engaging over there? Thanks much. Novellasyes (talk) 13:33, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
Political activity in the lede
[edit]Every so often there are edits made to the lede regarding the Knights' political activity. They are usually quickly reverted, but it happens often enough that I think it is worthwhile to have the discussion again and see where the consensus lies.
Currently, there is a single sentence on the topic:
The Knights promote the Catholic view on public policy issues, including opposition to same-sex marriage and abortion.
There is a section of the article devoted to the topic and an entire article that explores the subject in greater detail: Political activity of the Knights of Columbus. There, the lede is four paragraphs long, and includes one paragraph on their more recent political activity:
More recently, it has taken an active stance on social issues and causes, supporting religious freedom and opposing efforts to introduce or promote same-sex marriage, abortion, and mandates that require employers to pay for artificial birth control, even if they violate their religious beliefs. The Order has also taken an interest in the rights of immigrants and refugees, especially those immigrants and refugees who come from Catholic-majority countries.
According to MOS:LEDE, "The lead should stand on its own as a concise overview of the article's topic." Considering that "The Knights of Columbus has played an active role in politics ever since its formation," and covers a range of issues well beyond same sex marriage and abortion, both historically and currently, I don't think the current sentence is a concise overview, nor does " the emphasis given to material in the lead... reflect its importance to the topic." Same-sex marriage is only a tiny fraction of what they have done over the last century and a half.
Even if you were just looking at recent history, the Knights' efforts surrounding immigration are more recent than their activities surrounding same-sex marriage, yet that topic is not covered in the lede at all. Neither are their efforts to promote peace and trade unionism, the protection of civil rights, and efforts to address racism, to give just a few examples. It is also very heavily focused on the US.
All of that would be far too much detail for the lede of this article, however. Given that, I propose a new, one sentence summary to replace what is currently there, to wit: "The Knights of Columbus have played an active role in politics ever since its formation, and promote the Catholic view on public policy issues around the world." Slugger O'Toole (talk) 14:16, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- We already do. Slatersteven (talk) 14:34, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- Already do what? Also, I've laid out an argument and proposed new text. I'd appreciate your thoughts on what you think of that new language, and how it might be improved. --Slugger O'Toole (talk) 16:13, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- "The Knights promote the Catholic view on public policy issues..." so all you are in fact doing is removing wording, and not just about gay marriage. Slatersteven (talk) 16:17, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- No, that is not all I am doing. Not even close. I am removing two very specific items that are not representative of the entire century and a half history of this organization. I am adding a new preceding clause to help put it in greater context. I am eliminating problems with WP:RECENCY. I am improving the "emphasis given to material [to] reflect its relative importance to the subject." I am "briefly summariz[ing] the most important points covered in an article" while avoiding "overly specific descriptions." I am making it more WP:DUE.
- At least I am trying to do all of those things. If you think I am mistaken, I would appreciate a more substantive reply. If you think you could improve upon my proposal, I would be glad to see it. If you think what currently exists is superior to what I am proposing, I would welcome an explanation of why. I've made a good faith proposal, and a three word ambiguous reply is not terribly helpful in moving the ball forward. --Slugger O'Toole (talk) 16:54, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- So have they stopped opposing those things? Slatersteven (talk) 17:01, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- Not to my knowledge but, if you read what I said above, that's beside the point. -- Slugger O'Toole (talk) 17:12, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- And I disagree, if they no longer existed what they did 100 years ago would matter, but they do still exist so what they do today is in fact far more relevant than what they did a century and a half ago. But I feel it may be time for others to chip in, take silence from me as a no. Slatersteven (talk) 17:18, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- I agree that some other voices would be helpful here but, if your point is that we should be discussing their most recent activities, then we should cut gay marriage and add their "resolution criticizing the Trump administration family separation policy." I believe that's the most recent activity cited. Regardless, I think we should be summarizing the entire article, not just what is newest. --Slugger O'Toole (talk) 17:40, 18 October 2024 (UTC) [Correction: Here is the most recent activity: In the wake of killings of two men, Alton Sterling and Philando Castile, by police officers in Louisiana and Minnesota, and the subsequent shooting of Dallas police officers, the Order has campaigned for peace. After multiple mass shootings in 2019, the Knights were among a group of Catholic leaders who decried the shootings and urged policy changes.]] --Slugger O'Toole (talk) 17:45, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- And I disagree, if they no longer existed what they did 100 years ago would matter, but they do still exist so what they do today is in fact far more relevant than what they did a century and a half ago. But I feel it may be time for others to chip in, take silence from me as a no. Slatersteven (talk) 17:18, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- Not to my knowledge but, if you read what I said above, that's beside the point. -- Slugger O'Toole (talk) 17:12, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- So have they stopped opposing those things? Slatersteven (talk) 17:01, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- "The Knights promote the Catholic view on public policy issues..." so all you are in fact doing is removing wording, and not just about gay marriage. Slatersteven (talk) 16:17, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- Already do what? Also, I've laid out an argument and proposed new text. I'd appreciate your thoughts on what you think of that new language, and how it might be improved. --Slugger O'Toole (talk) 16:13, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- Could we start with the lead sentence: "It has grown to support..." (one before the one you are talking about) and summarize the lead of Political activity of the Knights of Columbus into those two sentences, briefly mentioning all their activities (opposing anarchism, communism and socialism, supportive of trade unionism, civil rights, against racism, opposing same-sex marriage and abortion, supporting immigrants and refugees).
- As a side comment, activities like "supporting immigrants and refugees" doesn't seem to me like it would automatically be "political" unless lobbying governmental bodies is involved. Giving money and help to refugees and immigrants isn't what I would consider "political" and I think the article could benefit from clarifying this for the reader; is this just social help or political lobbying? ---Avatar317(talk) 23:54, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- In the sentence, "The Knights promote the Catholic view on public policy issues, including opposition to same-sex marriage and abortion." I'm in favor of at least removing the part about same-sex marriage. The linked article is based on a study that covers their spending on (mostly) ballot measures about same-sex marriage covering the period 2005-2012. That period ended 12 years ago. Spending money on anti-same-sex marriage politically has been a dead letter since Obergefell v. Hodges. I'm sure the Knights still oppose same-sex marriage in some sense, but at least as far as anything we've linked here, the last time they opposed it in a specifically political sense (spending money on ballot measures) was over a decade ago. Novellasyes (talk) 00:40, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
- I think we are heading in the right direction here, although I worry that listing every cause they have ever supported will create a list that will 1) be too long to comfortably read, and 2) too much detail for the lede. That said, do you want to propose some new language and we can workshop it?
- As to supporting refugees and immigrants, I think their activities have been both charitable and political. --Slugger O'Toole (talk) 14:42, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
- All things considered, I am now in favor of your proposal to change the sentence to "The Knights of Columbus have played an active role in politics ever since its formation, and promote the Catholic view on public policy issues around the world." This is because I think it is somewhat lame to substantiate their political involvement on same-sex marriage when it probably ended 12 years ago, and I also think it is somewhat lame to then have just one specified political topic (abortion). That would imply that their political involvement in abortion stands out head-and-shoulders above their political involvement in anything else. That's probably not an implication that can be substantiated. Also, do they get politically involved around abortion these days? For example, there are numerous abortion ballot measures on state ballots these days. Are they putting money into those? If they are, does major notable RS around the Knights indicate that when you think of the Knights and any political activities they get into, should abortion be the first thing that comes to mind or does come to mind or is written up in RS as a singularly notable aspect of what they do. I don't think so. Novellasyes (talk) 12:55, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
- Are we explicitly thinking of "political" as meaning instances where they give money to political campaigns or to activities that are very adjacent to a political campaign? Or paid money to actual political lobbyists, as per Avatar317. So for example, if the Knights frequently say and opine and assert on their website that they oppose/support X, but don't give political money to oppose/support X, does that count as political giving or as one of their political activities? I would say "no". There might be a bit of a line-drawing problem here but maybe none of us disagree on that anyway. Novellasyes (talk) 15:12, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
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