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2021 Western Kentucky tornado

Hello, WeatherWriter. This is a courtesy notice that the copy edit you requested for 2021 Western Kentucky tornado at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page is now complete. All feedback welcome! Cheers, Baffle☿gab 04:43, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi WeatherWriter, just to let you know in the section "Meteorological synopsis", I've copied over the excerpted material from Tornado outbreak of December 10–11, 2021. This text can now be integrated more fully into this article. Please see my edit summaries for attribution notices and rationales. Cheers, Baffle☿gab 01:14, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've now finished my copy-edit; I noticed a fair amount of uncited text, particularly further down the article, which I've marked with [citation needed] tags. Some older ones will also need to be dealt with. I also noticed material in the "Impacts" --> "Casualties" subsection is also in the section above; it might be good to collate that information in one subsection. I also think the lede can be expanded to three or four paragraphs. Anyway, I hope the c/e is useful; good luck with our planned GA nom. Cheers, Baffle☿gab 04:43, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]