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Graph

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There is already a Stoke City season-by-season graph, if a Port Vale graph is created I would think it would be good to combine them and put them on this article to show the teams positions relative to each other.--EchetusXe (talk) 14:04, 13 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

City size

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P.S Stoke is most definatley not larger than Nottingham —Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.67.138.24 (talk) 20:09, 17 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

True!--EchetusXe 22:43, 17 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 08:11, 19 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 08:11, 19 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the delay, real life stuff getting in the way, I'll try to get it done on the weekend. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 09:13, 21 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No rush. EchetusXe 16:53, 26 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@EchetusXe: It looks in pretty good shape. Just need those issues pointed out fixed, then please ping me and I'll have another look. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 07:33, 27 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

-Thanks, I've looked at those.@The C of E: --EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 00:50, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that a patch of mud was a deciding factor in one Potteries derby football match? Source: Bullock, Liam (2023). El Ceramico: The Story of the Potteries Derby. Pitch. p. 78. ISBN 978-1-80150-393-8.

Improved to Good Article status by EchetusXe (talk). Self-nominated at 14:14, 29 February 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Potteries derby; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

  • Adequate sourcing: Yes
  • Neutral: Yes
  • Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: Yes
  • Other problems: No - Some of the wording sounds far too much like what a stereotypical sportswriter would write, rather than written in an encyclopedic tone. Examples include "derby saga", "did Vale no favours", "Stoke boss Guðjón Þórðarson had his eyes on promotion", etc.
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: AGF on offline sources; ALT1 is the easier one to cite (presumably), but needs its citation moved to the same sentence to comply with DYK guidelines. SounderBruce 07:09, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

What do you mean "needs its citation moved to the same sentence"? EchetusXe 12:52, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Looks like this was removed from the DYK guidelines somewhat recently. Normally hooks in the prose had to have a citation placed as closely as possible to make it easier to verify. I can approve this once some copyediting is done. SounderBruce 02:11, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Okay I've done that now. Thanks. EchetusXe 08:46, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The last sentence of the "Keeping apart" section needs major rewriting, and some more problematic phrases remain, such as "scrappy piece of play" and "facing a ducking in the River Trent". The tone is just not befitting of the wider project. SounderBruce 04:34, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've removed that last sentence as the incident didn't have any lasting significance. I've reworded "facing a ducking". I have kept "scrappy piece of play" in. It seems there is a slight difference in the definition of the word scrappy in American English and British English, but the article is written in British English so the word scrappy is perfectly suitable to the tone of the project. EchetusXe 10:14, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@SounderBruce: Is this approved or are there other concerns with this article? Z1720 (talk) 19:31, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, didn't see the update in my watchlist. I guess "scrappy" should be fine in this context, and the article's casual language has been toned down. Approved. SounderBruce 04:03, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]