Talk:Pershing Square Building

Pershing Square Building has been listed as one of the Art and architecture good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: April 1, 2020. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Pershing Square Building appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 1 January 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that 110 East 42nd Street and the Pershing Square Building, both located above a subway station, were designed with interlocking structures, including what is thought to be New York City's tallest party wall?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2020/January. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/110 East 42nd Street.

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Pershing Square Building/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:43, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

" Grand Union Hotel.[3] Construction..." just a solitary ref in the lead, probably could be removed as long as the material is noted and referenced in the main body.
- Removed.
" in 2010. In 2016" vaguely clunky.
- Fixed.
"the Dual Contracts was" were?
- Fixed.
" cost $3.5 million, then a very high sum.[" consider inflation so we don't need "then a very high sum". And consider inflation on the other contemporaneous values.
- Fixed.
"The 25-story building's site. and " rogue period.
- Fixed.
" investor Henry Mandel[a] offered " awkward red link/note combo somewhat detracts from the fine prose.
- Removed the red link. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"accepted.[23]<[24]" rogue <.
- Fixed.
"Pershing Square Building Corp. " with or without period? Be consistent.
- I went with spelling out the name fully. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Continental Can Building could be a reasonable redirect to create since you have it in bold.
- Done.
"The current owner..." -> "As of 2020^[update] the owner is..."
- Done.
"110 East 42nd Street" has been linked a couple of times already before you get to the third link in the Description section.
- I removed this duplicate link. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"peace.[47][35]" while you're editing, could you order these?
- Done.
Could link Vanderbilt Avenue (in the caption).
- Done.
" is a 24-story office " vs "who took up the 24th and 25th floors"?
- Fixed. It is 25 stories but the 25th story is not a full-lot penthouse. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Check consistency in refs, e.g. ref 37 has a URL and a publication date but no accessdate, unlike the others.
- I have fixed these. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The article is excellent and it's hard to find fault. It's certainly GA quality but could we just address these issues before I promote? Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 11:56, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the comments. I have fixed them all. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good work, definitely happy with that so promoting. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:15, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]