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This article has numerous issue that need to be addressed before it is considered encyclopedic, any information or assistance is welcomed. As you go through and add/correct some of these things, do not delete them, but rather cross them out, by placing the crossed out code. Thanks! Touch Of Light (talk) 04:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
No mention of his wife's last name, nor any information as to when they were married, or when their children were born.
Article is written as to emphasize his reach on the people of South America, it should be toned down and neutralized. (Ex: "It was in 1955 that Paul felt God gave him a vision to evanglize the masses through radio.")
Early life is brief and uninformative. No mention of schooling, parents, childhood.
Needs more sources and fact checks on some of the statistics (ex: "Most of the ministry's messages are transmitted through secular media, and the majority of its listeners are non-Christians.")
Advertisement-like statements throughout the text (ex:"Please check back soon as we compile notes on the extraordinary life and career of Paul Finkenbinder.") These should be removed entirely unless there is encyclopedic content to add.
Biased statements with no real fact (ex:"The ministry has continued to thrive under Charles' and Linda's leadership.")
It would be good to go through and wikify some of the material as well.
