Talk:From the Holy Mountain

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Marked a couple of POV comments

The last section of this article reads more like a personal book review, which is not appropriate for Wikipedia. For example, who is to say that something is "[p]articularly fascinating", or that Dalrymple is "very good"? It's fine for us to quote (good) sources giving their assessments, but we as editors should not be passing our own judgements. Loganberry (Talk) 00:31, 10 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I removed the last section. The article with the last section included was difficult to understand. It seemed as if "98.204.55.51" just tacked the last section on to the original article without reading the whole article through to see if it made sense. It didn't make sense to me. Skopelos-Slim (talk) 12:12, 6 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]