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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to improve it but I'm just getting repeatedly bogged down in discussion with another user, as you can see at Talk:Self-managed_social_center#Developing_this_page and Talk:Self-managed_social_center#Developing_this_page_2 . The current structure is not satisfying, since it's split between incomplete coverage of functions and a breakdown by country. I'd welcome some feedback on how to improve the page.
Much obliged for any comments, Mujinga (talk ) 10:33, 21 September 2019 (UTC) [ reply ]
Italy , United States and United Kingdom sections should probably be subsectioned under a separate header (something like Examples ). Hope this helps for now. Thanks, Thatoneweird wikier Say hi 15:33, 9 February 2020 (UTC) [ reply ] "free schools" is in bold for some reason.
"United States" should be linked at its first mention ("for example in Italy , the United States and the United Kingdom ".)
Uses : "infoshop" is linked despite the link appearing in the lede.History : "enclave" should be linked."Wobbly union halls" - is this a proper noun?
"squatted" should be delinked.
The second paragraph doesn't seem to fully talk about autonomous social centers - it seems more of an opinionated viewpoint.
Italy : The first sentence links to the main article of this section.United Kingdom : Same problem as above."infoshop" should be delinked.
Infoshops : There seems to be more detail into this description than in the article , but it should be the other way around.Same as above for Free schools , although that doesn't seem to have an article.
"economics" should be delinked. Mujinga , that's everything. Let me know if there are any problems. Thanks, Thatoneweird wikier Say hi 01:48, 10 February 2020 (UTC) [ reply ] Mujinga (talk ) 11:25, 10 February 2020 (UTC) [ reply ] 
