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Hi. I recently created this article on a book written by two Pulitzer Prize winning authors. It’s about Donald trump’s financial and business life and is bound to reach #1 on the NYT list. Looking for people to improve the summary and maybe add a new section or two covering release and promotion. Also open to feedback on language and prose.
Thanks, Lisha2037 (talk) 18:55, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
[edit]@Lisha2037: I am sorry that it has taken so long to get feedback. Some comments below:
- The second half of the "Critical reception" follows an "X said Y" format, and relies upon quotes. I think this can be summarised and reworded to focus on themes, rather than choosing specific reviewers to highlight their comments.
- I am surprised that there haven't been more sources about this book. I suggest looking in Google News, WP:LIBRARY, or your local library system to find additional sources.
- Is there any information on sales of the book?
- " "ABOUT LUCKY LOSER"." Per MOS:ALLCAPS, this should be in sentence case.
I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 23:29, 19 December 2024 (UTC)