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I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it provides a comprehensive overview of the electric vehicle manufacturer EKA Mobility, but I would like feedback on the following areas:
- Clarity and depth of the company's history and operations.
- Coverage of its partnerships, investments, and future outlook.
- Whether the references are sufficient and reliable.
- Suggestions for any additional sections or information to enhance the article.
Thank you for your time and input!
~Vishalwakchaure1992
Airship
[edit]As requested, I will provide feedback on the clarity and coverage of the article, the reliability of the sourcing, and any additional information.
- The first thing to note is that the article is structured in a highly-promotional style—ChatGPT favours a similar superfluity of headings, and the article looks AI-generated. I would recommend removing all section headers before "See also", and using just paragraphs instead. This makes the article look much more professional, and will make it much less likely to get draftified or deleted.
- Coverage of the areas you have requested is fairly slim on first glance. However, for a company founded in 2019, I think it is quite adequate.
- The references also look quite neutral and independent, which is rare for a new Indian company. However there are a couple of issues. You must make sure that all of the links are still extant—use archive.org if any of the destinations fail. I see that the Zauba Corp. link, for example, no longer works.
- There is also occasional WP:CITEKILL—unless the information is really important, there is no point placing four citations after the end of a sentence.
- I would also trim the infobox—there is no need for Sudhir Mehta to be mentioned twice, while the number of employees a) is uncited and b) will regularly change in the first years of a company's existence, so you can probably remove it.
Good work. Ping me if you have any questions. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 23:58, 31 October 2024 (UTC)