Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Vegas Golden Knights seasons/archive1

List of Vegas Golden Knights seasons

Featured list candidates/List of Vegas Golden Knights seasons/archive1

Nominator(s): The Kip ^(contribs) 08:13, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Continuing in the project laid out at WP:VGK, here's another FL candidate. Tables already seemed adequate, though at the direction of PresN from some months ago I added the ongoing 2024–25 season for length reasons; otherwise, I expanded the lead based off other NHL season FLs, and added graphics. The Kip ^(contribs) 08:13, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Lead image caption isn't a sentence so should not have a full stop
2017-18 NHL season is linked multiple times in the lead
Note a is surely not needed as (unless I am missing something) it just duplicates the earlier key
Note c needs a full stop
Think that's all I got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude Wowza, thanks for the quick reply! All have been taken care of. The Kip ^(contribs) 09:00, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:13, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

six times in their first seven completed seasons, First is unnecessary as they haven't finished any other seasons (or seven of them for that matter).
the Golden Knights instead suffered a rash of injuries and poor play, eventually missing the playoffs for the first time in franchise history. Is "instead" necessary?
first-round exit against the San Jose Sharks the following season, Something about the link going to the Stanley Cup playoffs from "the following season" seems misleading, perhaps a rewording is required.
Recommend changing the "Season" header to "NHL season".
Notes 1 and 2 in the year-by-year section can probably be converted into actual notes, considering there's already 3 notes in that table.

That's all I got. Kline • talk • contribs 18:23, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kline Fixed everything but the "instead" bit - I figured that's necessary as a contrast to the fact they entered the season as Cup favorites. The Kip ^(contribs) 20:51, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Nevermind, I now see how I've already set up the contrast with "Despite." The Kip ^(contribs) 20:59, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good work, support. Kline • talk • contribs 21:18, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]