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December 2017

January 2018

  • Update: I have removed the two extremely long paragraphs, removed irrelevant information in first one (lead) and divided second one into smaller paragraphs so removed tag for lead and changed cleanup tag. However, more references will be needed later and some copyedits, reduction and expansion might be required in some places in the article, might be able to do some more, especially removing present tense, but if anyone else has other ways to improve this article, please do so. Broman178 (talk) 10:33, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

March 2018

 Partly done Tried to give the article a more neutral stance and did some general cleanup, but it could still use some better citation. --LichWizard talk 21:08, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

April 2018

 Partly done - Added some more categories to the page Lucie Person (talk) 03:36, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done (still) - Added an infobox, and more cleanup done Lucie Person (talk) 20:28, 22 April 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Cleaned up reference duplication. --LichWizard talk 18:52, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

May 2018

@Kausticgirl:If you can identify a date in the past when the article was not "a confusing mess", it should be fairly easy for us to update it to a state resembling what it was back then. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 00:50, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Fixed and cleaned up sections. However the article is highly uncited and is a copyvio. AmericanAir88 (talk) 14:03, 30 July 2018 (UTC)

June 2018

July 2018

 Partly done I fixed most of the issues but would like more experienced editors to take a look at it. The article still has very emotional language in breast implants scandal part. Also, as far as I understand, the company changed its name to avoid bankruptcy - this should probably be added to the article. "Compliance" part might also need attention. Looks like it has some very obvious facts (doctors should have licenses). --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:39, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Removed information pertaining to specific members and removed irrelevant information. Cleaned up repeated wikilinks in the body. --Madds212 (talk) 19:59, 10 August 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done AmericanAir88 (talk) 00:14, 1 August 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Made article improvements pertaining to promotional content. I included some references, however additional are needed for unreferenced facts. ChrisD Strummer (talk) 18:59, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
I've put in templates for notability, advertising, etc. It may be a candidate for a deletion discussion if there's not enough notability. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 00:16, 21 August 2018 (UTC)
  • Abdul Wahid Omar - the original editor write it in a fan's point of view and the article was tagged as such. I've try to improve the article as much as I can, looking for sources etc but I need someone else to check and clean it up. Froswo (talk) 06:33, 12 July 2018 (UTC)
  • Everette Taylor - The editor who created the article was found guilty of taking pay for creating a different article. So there is this banner at the top of the articles he created that says it was paid for. However the subject of this article is notable enough. The article should be worked on and the banner removed since we aren't sure this very subject paid for his — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aghachi7 (talk • contribs) 20:57, 6 July 2018 (UTC)

August 2018

 Partly done Eliminated unrelated info, added wikilinks, and formatted words. --Madds212 (talk) 17:45, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
Edited grammar and orthography werewolf (talk) 04:43, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Filled references and added infobox. Now someone needs to fill the infobox :) Sorry, I am not a rugby fan. :) -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:49, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
Cleaned up infobox and added career stats. Clembathon (talk) 11:27, 27 September 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Shortened the lead section --Madds212 (talk) 20:11, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
I just removed the section that copies from a primary source because it restated another part of the article. The rest still needs work though. Laurel Wreath of Victors ‖ Speak 💬 ‖ 20:05, 20 August 2018 (UTC)
cleaned up a little--just a little DGG ( talk ) 06:16, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done remove excess naming & minor cleanup for article. ⊂Emoteplump (Contributions) (Talk) 12:20, 26 January 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done added bare url tag so problem will be solved in no time. ⊂Emoteplump (Contributions) (Talk) 12:44, 26 January 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done I removed most of the bullets but I am unsure if I should remove them in the final section. --Madds212 (talk) 17:25, 21 September 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done Still requires a lot of cleanup but I've started. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 00:34, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
It is a draft, so why bother? -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 10:49, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
From what I can tell, it was an article, but got moved into a draft instead of being put on Cleanup. I want to take a crack at fixing it up and pushing it back live, but I'm not sure if I'm permitted to try. Looks interesting though given his status as an entrepreneur and brother of another prominent billionaire. Your thoughts, Bbarmadillo? -- MakersBreath (talk) 11:30, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
Well, given the undisclosed conflict of interest it cannot/should not be moved to main space directly, but should go through the WP:AFC. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:33, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
I may be inferring this incorrectly; I apologize if I am, but does this mean that me or any other editor who might be interested in this draft must create the article afresh? If so, then wouldn't that fall under duplicacy? Again, I'm sorry if I sound stupid about this. -- MakersBreath (talk) 05:13, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done I've given it a positive once over. Cleaned it, made it live. But this still requires a second look, preferably from a different set of eyes. If anyone is up for it, kindly do take it up. In the meanwhile, I'll be working on this simultaneously as well. Thanks, MakersBreath (talk) 04:32, 20 August 2018 (UTC)

September 2018

 Partly done Began working on making sure everything is consistent, fixing image captions and adding new signs slowly. -- Boilermakerjustin (talk) 05:31, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done Did some basic cleanup, but a think that the article is a candidate for deletion. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 16:30, 16 September 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done fixed some issues. There are 3 YouTube links at the article that need proper template. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:06, 16 September 2018 (UTC)
 Partly done didn't get any editing done, but I found an article very similar to it IllumiNations: Reflections of Earth --via (talk) 02:39, 21 March 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done Removed some of the promotional writing in there, and removed an unnecessary section --via (talk) 02:47, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

December 2018

 Done Tinton5 (talk) 01:11, 29 March 2019 (UTC)

Others

 Done - not by me, but syntax issues are resolved Nosebagbear (talk) 23:34, 15 December 2018 (UTC)
I submit that the topic has weak notability of its own and the article does not attempt to assert any notability for the topic or any of the listed events. I have PRODded the article with this argument and we'll see if anything happens. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 21:16, 27 December 2018 (UTC)
@Doomsdayer520: I believe taking it to AFD is a better route. If the PROD is removed then I will take it to AFD. I agree with you. AmericanAir88(talk) 00:48, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
Article was deleted today. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 00:19, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
Note This is a draft of an article. AmericanAir88(talk) 21:03, 15 October 2018 (UTC)
 Not done This article has failed the review and is still in draft space.
 Done fixed by several editors. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:06, 22 December 2018 (UTC)
Moved to Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Requests. Tinton5 (talk) 04:42, 26 October 2018 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 01:02, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
 Done Shringhringshring (talk) 16:34, 8 January 2019 (UTC)
Completed. Tinton5 (talk) 08:58, 16 January 2019 (UTC)
 Done Fixed up the grammar quite a bit, although the article as a whole could still use a bit more work. --LichWizard talk 18:47, 14 January 2019 (UTC)
 Done Syntaxlord (talk) 00:26, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
 Done Syntaxlord (talk) 00:08, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed by TheAnonymousNerd. North America1000 02:56, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed I created an infobox and a table of contents. Syntaxlord (talk) 16:16, 10 February 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed by TylerDurden8823. Syntaxlord (talk) 01:25, 19 February 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed AmericanAir88(talk) 03:59, 23 February 2019 (UTC)
 Done Syntaxlord (talk) 22:19, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
 Done They didn't work because they were linking to references that weren't on the page. I've copied and pasted the references they refer to. A garbage person (talk) 23:49, 6 February 2019 (UTC)
 Done The sfn's weren't working because they need to hook onto a defined "ref" field, which the sources you were trying to link to didn't have. For example, "|ref=harv" or "|ref={{harvid|Sample Harv Id|year}}". I've gone and added "|ref=harv" to the end of all the works in the Sources section. For more about short footnotes, I'd look at the template documentation, especially the How to use it section. A garbage person (talk) 23:49, 6 February 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed Syntaxlord (talk) 02:50, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
 Done Syntaxlord (talk) 15:48, 2 February 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done - I added the "Bare URLs" tag to the article, which notifies a team of bots and humans that usually fix that particular problem without delay. So that issue is in good hands but I wonder about the topic's notability. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 21:12, 27 December 2018 (UTC)
 Done by various editors/bots & someone already explained its notability. ⊂Emoteplump (Contributions) (Talk) 11:46, 26 January 2019 (UTC)
 DonePlum3600 (talk) 13:15, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
Thanks again. Sincerely, Masum Reza☎ 14:22, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
 Done Syntaxlord (talk) 21:39, 24 February 2019 (UTC)
  • Rosetta Allan page - has warning of work put up for payment, which isn't true. I tried to put an author photo up, and Wikipedia's questions were angled toward copywrite issues that got confusing, so the photo was rejected, and I think this has caused the problem. I don't mind not having the photo up, but the warning sign looks bad. Can someone clean this page? Thank you. Rosetta Allan.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Poetryrose (talk • contribs)
 Fixed – Work put up for payment warning has been replaced with an NPOV autobiography warning. Syntaxlord (talk) 00:48, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed -Stelio (talk) 13:17, 25 February 2019 (UTC)
This has been resolved by replacing the entire page with a redirect to a category containing individual pages. -Stelio (talk) 12:46, 25 February 2019 (UTC)
 Not done There wasn't any capitalisation used in the article.Plum3600 (talk) 13:43, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
 Not done Article was deleted. --LichWizard talk 20:02, 4 March 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed. North America1000 09:03, 14 March 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed by User:AmericanAir88. North America1000 09:04, 14 March 2019 (UTC)
Tagged "linkrot" for the automatic bare URLs fix. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:47, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
 Done --Bbarmadillo (talk) 16:25, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
 Done Usedtobecool (talk) 22:06, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
 Done Syntaxlord (talk) 18:54, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done Deleted the repeating headers. --LichWizard talk 21:15, 9 March 2019 (UTC)
Thanks! Struck part of my post above. North America1000 07:26, 11 March 2019 (UTC)
Vegetable juice is missing from the list. Tinton5 (talk) 04:01, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done Added Vegetable juice to the list. I'll try to alphabetize it when I get a chance. --LichWizard talk 19:36, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 Done. Thanks to everyone who helped out to improve the article. Anaiyio alphabetized the list, so I have now struck the rest of my nomination above. North America1000 16:09, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 21:57, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
 Done Syntaxlord (talk) 01:36, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed Syntaxlord (talk) 21:53, 21 April 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed Fixed by other editors. Sincerely, Masum Reza☎ 03:40, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 Done I marked the dead links. No bare URLs are currently found. Tinton5 (talk) 01:16, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed. North America1000 16:51, 16 March 2019 (UTC)
  • Self-storage box - this article is very poorly written. The grammar is wonky, one of the section titles appears to have been written like a computer code statement, and the sources used aren't great.
 Partly done Fixed some grammatical errors InvisibleUp (talk) 15:28, 23 April 2019 (UTC)
 Done by Jerome Paterson (talk) 09:42, 13 May 2019 (UTC) fixed some of the grammar and added some references.
 Partly done Fixed reference errors Syntaxlord (talk) 19:00, 23 April 2019 (UTC)
 Done Fixed all reference styles and added archives. Sincerely, Masum Reza☎ 04:39, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed Syntaxlord (talk) 14:55, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 Done Syntaxlord (talk) 01:16, 28 May 2019 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 14:00, 21 May 2019 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 14:27, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

 Partly done - I've made edits to fix it partly. Would be great if anyone else can check to verify --Castdates (talk) 08:02, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

 Done--Castdates (talk) 04:13, 28 May 2019 (UTC)
 Done --Brevity (talk) 07:22, 18 May 2019 (UTC)
 Done Syntaxlord (talk) 00:01, 7 May 2019 (UTC)
 Done I was able to format most of the URLs, but I had to mark one dead link. Syntaxlord (talk) 21:40, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 19:34, 10 July 2019 (UTC)
 Done by myself and other editors. AmericanAir88(talk) 19:09, 10 July 2019 (UTC)
 Fixed Improved writing and marked dead link. Syntaxlord (talk) 19:20, 9 July 2019 (UTC)
 Done by various users. Tinton5 (talk) 01:32, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
 Done by SVTCobra. AmericanAir88(talk) 14:00, 19 June 2019 (UTC)
 Done Completed. Tinton5 (talk) 01:19, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
  • Prosoft Engineering - I have disclosed my affiliation with said company and would like the page to be reviewed. If an unbiased Wikipedian can go over the page as well to make sure that the page is read with no bias to conform with Wikipedias guide lines. --Sam3077 (talk) 19:27, 30 May 2019 (UTC)
☒N Deleted per AFD. AmericanAir88(talk) 19:15, 10 July 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done - Improved several references and added basic infobox. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:56, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
I've struck the above entry. The article is properly formatted at this time. North America1000 06:44, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done Fixed visual formatting and removed repeat wikilinks. Source formatting may still need cleanup --Madds212 (talk) 17:36, 21 September 2018 (UTC)
Green tickY Struck the above. The sources and formatting are in good shape at this time. North America1000 05:47, 17 May 2019 (UTC)
 Not done Drafted. AmericanAir88(talk) 13:56, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88(talk) 16:42, 25 July 2019 (UTC)
 Not done Drafted by DGG. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 05:48, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
 Done --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:35, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 Done Drafted byBachspin (talk) 14:36, 2 August 2019 (UTC)
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