User talk:Vjspez/1965 San Francisco 49ers season

Preliminary Review from Kaylea

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you.

One area of improvement for this article will be to shift towards a more encyclopedic tone -- you will need to maintain a "Neutral Point of View" about this topic. You'll find more ideas in this Wikipedia policy: WP:NPOV. Another area to improve is your use of sources and citations. Right now what I see is a fair bit of text being added without the sources to back it up. I see that you reviewed the sources in the original article -- you will likely need to dig up a few fresh sources so that you can extend the article.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 23:04, 27 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review - Kalena

Hey Vin, I left a peer review for you. Hope it helps! Kclav15 (talk) 21:25, 28 January 2022 (UTC)Kclav15[reply]