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Your submission at Articles for creation: Leon Lynch (September 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Cabrils was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Well done on creating the draft, and it may potentially meet the relevant requirements (including WP:GNG, WP:ANYBIO) but presently does not. Wikipedia's basic requirement for entry is that the subject is notable . Essentially subjects are presumed notable if they have received significant coverage in multiple published secondary sources that are reliable, intellectually independent of each other, and independent of the subject. To properly create such a draft page, please see referencing for beginners. Additionally, the draft tends to read too much like a CV, which Wikipedia is not. Please familiarise yourself with these pages before amending the draft. If you feel you can meet these requirements then resubmit the page and ping me and I would be happy to reassess.

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Cabrils (talk) 01:01, 23 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, STTLynch! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Cabrils (talk) 01:01, 23 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Have received feedback and suggestions from other editors and plan to proceed. STTLynch (talk) 13:31, 24 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

References

I suggest practicing creating references in your Sandbox. then copying into the draft when OK. Perhaps copy a section of the draft into the Sandbox, add refs, then paste back. The Software handles the numbering automatically. Here is some text with refs embedded:

A review conducted by the federal government on pay scale shows that employees in a labor union earn up to 33% more income than their nonunion counterparts, as well as having more job security, and safer and higher-quality work conditions.^[1] New media organizations and later traditional newspapers led a wave of unionization since 2015, spurred by losses during the Great Recession and start-up layoffs. NewsGuild and Writers Guild of America won many of these efforts, including 5,000 journalists across 90 organizations.^[2] David notMD (talk) 11:53, 24 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the clear examples. I appreciate your help.

Thank you for the clear examples on inline references. I will work on the draft and share for input. I am a beginner so certain to get something wrong. Thanks again. STTLynch (talk) 13:21, 24 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

^ Schultz, Duane P. Schultz, Sydney Ellen (2010). Psychology and work today : an introduction to industrial and organizational psychology (10th ed.). Upper Saddle River, N.J.: Prentice Hall. pp. 271–272. ISBN 978-0205683581.{{cite book}}: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)
^ Smith, Ben (May 4, 2020). "How a New Breed of Union Activists Is Changing the Rules (and Newsrooms)". The New York Times. ISSN 0362-4331.

[1] Schultz, Duane P. Schultz, Sydney Ellen (2010). Psychology and work today : an introduction to industrial and organizational psychology (10th ed.). Upper Saddle River, N.J.: Prentice Hall. pp. 271–272. ISBN 978-0205683581.{{cite book}}: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)

[2] Smith, Ben (May 4, 2020). "How a New Breed of Union Activists Is Changing the Rules (and Newsrooms)". The New York Times. ISSN 0362-4331.

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