User talk:Ryanzhu21/Fanny Hesse

peer review

I thought the information you plan to add was good. There was no bias to it and gives readers a brief run down and history on who they were. I would maybe find a little more information but I thought your content was easy to understand, followed formatting guidelines, and was organized, and had easy to follow sections. I thought it covered everything well but could maybe use a summary section where it ties everything together. All in all, I thought it was good. Happy writing! Abigailmarie99 (talk) 17:48, 21 March 2021 (UTC)Abigailmarie99