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I've been looking at the new articles. Please double check that you have not copied any of this from a previous publication, or resorted to Close paraphrase. And try for a more compact style. Significant facts, such as "he appears to have been a life-long bachelor" need to be sourced exactly . (especially since that phrase is often a euphemism) DGG ( talk ) 04:49, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
