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Crunchydillpickle🥒 (talk) 21:29, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the submission! I had fun learning about Dick Richards as I went through the article! I removed a lot of information that was better suited for the The American Music Show article and I broke up many of the long quotes. Let me know if you have any questions. This was a very thorough submission. I hope you keep editing Wikipedia :-) Crunchydillpickle🥒 (talk) 21:31, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your kind words. I like most of your edits. However, I have to rewrite the paragraph about the origin of The American Music Show because it minimizes James' significant role.

Can you tell me how to add some photos?

Thanks! MrLucky23 (talk) 17:36, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Citing interviews

I noticed that in articles you've created, you've cited various interviews as sources. Per WP:Reliable sources, sources must be published, meaning that it has been made available to the public. Please add the publication details to the citations to interviews so readers and other editors can verify information in the articles, thanks. Schazjmd (talk) 23:24, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Jeffreys article and NPOV

Your recently created article Joe E. Jeffreys does not read with a neutral point of view. It uses puffery in the first sentence when talking about how the subject is "recognized as a leading authority on the history and cultural significance of drag." Wikipedia aims to keep an encyclopedic tone and avoid subjective proclamations of subjects. You can read more about Wikipedia's policy on puffery or peacock words here: Manual of Style/Words to watch#Puffery.

Similarly, the entire article reads like a blurb of Jeffreys that you might find on the back of a book or on his website. Wikipedia is not "advertising, marketing, publicity, or public relations" - you can read more about that here: What Wikipedia is not#Wikipedia is not a soapbox or means of promotion. The article should aim to talk about Jeffreys in a "dispassionate tone, avoiding both understatement and overstatement" - you can review some do's and don't's on writing about biographies here: Biography dos and don'ts. Artwhitemaster (talk) 07:06, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]