Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mgp28 was:
This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
The comment the reviewer left was:
Please see my previous comment. Needs better / more secondary sources discussing the topic to show that it meets the notability criteria for an article.
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Hello, Miketoller!
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Hi Mgp28.
Thanks for your thoughtful feedback on my draft article on Clinical Wills. I'm new to creating pages on Wikipedia so your comments were really useful.
I'll have another go at finding better sources and resubmit. For context, I created ClinicaWill.app (which is why I followed the guidelines and declared a conflict of interest).
I included the link to the "What is a Clinical Will, and do I need one?" page because I have done a lot of thinking and research about clinical wills as part of the development of the app, and felt that this page is as useful a resource as any other available online. I have also written articles about clinical wills that have been published in trade magazines - however these behind paywalls annoyingly.
I appreciate that as a commercial platform it falls outside your guidelines for inclusion, though you may want to know the app is offered to users on a 'Pay What You Think Is Fair' basis.
I will edit and resubmit the page when I have time, and I would appreciate any further comments at that time. Thanks again for your attention jn the meantime.
Hello, Thank you for your reply. I don't in any way doubt your good work, but sometimes being so close to the subject can make it difficult to write an article that meets Wikipedia's requirements. Hopefully you will be able to navigate this. Regarding the other things you have written, even though they are behind a paywall, they might still be preferable to a link to your business. In case it's helpful I'll link to:
WP:SELFCITEUsing material you have written or published is allowed within reason
WP:PAYWALLDo not reject reliable sources just because they are difficult or costly to access.
