User talk:MaryAnthonyStartz

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Your sandbox

You made an inquiry on the Wikimedia Commons help desk that I presume was about User:MaryAnthonyStartz/sandbox. You would do better to ask at Wikipedia:Help desk (Commons is an entirely separate project).

I don't monitor a watchlist for the English-language Wikipedia these days, so I will not see if you respond here, but here are a few pointers:

What you've written so far is not in the style of a Wikipedia article. I suggest you look through half a dozen articles on similar subjects and get a sense of that style; your article is far more likely to be accepted if it is written in the usual style. In particular:
- The article should start with a lede: name, birth & death dates, short summary of who he was & why he's notable. Maybe I'm missing something, but at a quick skim, I cannot tell why this person would be important enough to merit an encyclopedia article. Most army sergeants do not meet that threshold, and a quick read does not indicate any extraordinary achievements on his part.
- Use mediawiki markup. Link relevant articles by using the [[article name]] syntax in your text.
- The article should be written as a continuous narrative, with virtually all issues of documentary evidence confined to footnotes.

When you've dealt with those issues, you can either copy-paste from your own sandbox page to the correct page in article space (presumably something like William McNamara (U.S. soldier) or you can "move" the sandbox page content to that new page (which would preserve the history of the edits you made while it was in the sand box). In either case, you would want to add an entry to William McNamara (disambiguation). I hope some of that helps. - Jmabel | Talk 01:18, 13 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi MaryAnthonyStartz! We're so happy you wanted to play to learn, as a friendly and fun way to get into our community and mission. I think these links might be helpful to you as you get started.

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AfC notification: Draft:William McNamara (soldier) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:William McNamara (soldier). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 03:46, 17 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, MaryAnthonyStartz. Your question has been answered at the Teahouse Q&A board. Feel free to reply there!
Please note that all old questions are archived after 2-3 days of inactivity. Message added by DES ^(talk) 13:44, 17 May 2017 (UTC). (You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{teahouse talkback}} template.[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: William McNamara (soldier) (May 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Shadowowl was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:William McNamara (soldier) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

» Shadowowl | talk 18:34, 18 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! MaryAnthonyStartz, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! » Shadowowl | talk 18:34, 18 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

About your draft on William McNamara

Hello MaryAnthonyStartz. I've put some minor fixes on your Draft:William McNamara (soldier). It's fixed the infobox problem, and seeing as everything else looks relatively in order, I'd suggest you resubmit it for review. I hope you haven't been discouraged by the previous rejection. Our reviewers over at AFC have a lot of content to sort through and often can't stop to make minor fixes. Feel free to ask me any additional questions at my talk page. -Indy beetle (talk) 20:56, 20 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: William McNamara (soldier) has been accepted

William McNamara (soldier), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

If you have any questions, you are welcome to ask at the help desk.
If you would like to help us improve this process, please consider leaving us some feedback.

Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!

» Shadowowl | talk 10:05, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]