User talk:Josh.theis

Hey Josh,

I went over your article (peer review) and I made a few edits. Some of the words didn't flow together, or you were missing a few words. I also notices that there was some lack of commas, which is no big deal. Overall I think your article is strong, having three sections really ties it together. I think you did a great job man. Hi Josh, I also went through your article. I only changed the wording on one sentence. The only other thing that I would maybe go back and revise is your amount of direct quotes. Most of the wiki pages I have looked at have just paraphrased their sources and not directly quoted something unless its an important definition or something like that. Overall though, I really enjoyed your edits. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Elli.b.minette (talk • contribs) 03:57, 26 April 2016 (UTC)