User talk:Culbert3002/Polar Bear Pass National Wildlife Area

Peer Review-Kai Tinker

Hi guys,

I like your article; it was well organized and had valuable information from good sources. All of it was neutral. The only thing with organization is I would have put wildlife above the endangered species section. My group did the same thing as you and it didn't flow as well without it. Also, there are some spelling and grammar mistakes. I would run it through Grammarly's free software to take a look at all of them. I also really liked the history of the Indigenous treaties and acts that you included in your paper. It put good perspective on the land itself. Finally, make sure you guys are citing all of the facts you have. It is okay if every sentence has a citation on it, I found some facts in there that were uncited and most likely are not common knowledge. You just got to be extremely careful with that.  Kai-tinker (talk) 18:18, 18 October 2022 (UTC)