User talk:Camilla.vi

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Happy editing! Jaqen (talk) 10:00, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

Lead

Hi, a few things:

• the lead section of an article does not need a section title: once the article is published in the main namespace the article title will appear in place of "User:Camilla.vi/sandbox"
• also, "new horizons to achieve a sustainable built environment" doesn't seem very neutral, see WP:NPOV
• if possible, the page title should be the subject of the first sentence (see MOS:FIRST)

Jaqen (talk) 08:03, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

Okay, thank you! I'm going to correct it Camilla.vi (talk) 09:39, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

References

Hi, please check your references, there are a few errors there. Jaqen (talk) 08:50, 11 July 2024 (UTC)