User talk:Awebb6/sandbox/Surface features of Venus
Ammar
[edit]your work is good, you need more pictures to allure the reader to read more. include pictures of corronae, enlarge the beautiful thumbnail images you already have. put the link section over the reference section (wikipedia format). You have a wonderful article going on here. AmmarBanafea (talk) 19:04, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
Feedback from Samantha
[edit]Whoa, Andrew. Very good draft––very dense. This page was rather easy to follow. The only trouble of found was in the grammar. In a few locations, spelling and grammar can be corrected. Otherwise, no trouble.
-SR
Feedback from Adam
[edit]Very well planned and executed. The page flows well and is set up in a very user-friendly way. All in all, I couldn't find too much wrong with it. One figure had the height of something and it said 22.5 but no units. Other than that aI couldn't find much that I would improve unless you find new material you'd like to add to it. Great work!!
Adamwalsh93 (talk) 04:49, 3 March 2015 (UTC)Adam Walsh
Feedback from Hunter
[edit]Very well put together article Andrew. I especially liked the rotating radar map, it really catches your eye as soon as you open up the page. I really don't know what I would do to change the article other than figuring out whether or not you decide to link it to the actual Venus wikipage. Great job!
-Hunter — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hvanwy1 (talk • contribs) 01:00, 4 March 2015 (UTC)