User talk:Arossomanno
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MTHarden (talk) 12:41, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
Week 2 assignments
[edit]Your critique of [Euphoria] is fine.
The addition you made to Syndrome of subjective doubles might be ok, but it looks like original research. That is to say, it appears that you came up with the idea that this movie is an example of the syndrome. See WP:NOR for more info. It seems like this idea might have been put forward in a "good" source and adding a reference would clear this up. In fact, adding a "good" reference to an article was the assignment, which your edit did not quite achieve. If you correct this I'll still give you some credit, but be sure to post on my talk page when you do.
- Euphoria - Assuming that this is your first choice, it'll be fine. I can't believe there isn't already more info on Euphoria. A student in the other section has also made edits to this page, so if you don't want it, he might.
- Gratification - This article also seems ripe for expansion.
- Syndrome of subjective doubles - I think this article could also be readily improved.
So you can pick whichever of the three you want, and list it here. --MTHarden (talk) 15:22, 28 June 2011 (UTC)