User talk:86.24.168.231

Draft:Lilly Yokoi

Hi IP, I found several sources and started a layout so please take a look. Can you verify you can access the sources I found? Most are U.S. newspaper clippings (via Newspapers.com). If you can access them, I suggest taking what I started and expand the prose based on what the sources say. As it stands now, the draft does is not an appropriate biography and does not convey why she is notable which has been an ongoing issue. I will help but I need you to at least start expanding it. Note, Circopedia is a tertiary source and one that has not been vetted yet by the Wikipedia community so best to only use it sparingly. I wish they cited their sources but they do not.

Can you tell me what The Illustrated London News and Le Grand livre du cirque say about her? I do not have adequate access to those although other editors likely do.

Oh and those declines/reject will need to be restored which I will handle at some point so please do not remove them again. All that does is make you seem disruptive which will get you blocked and most importantly does the draft no favors, to put it mildly. Any editor worth their salt knows to look at the history of page, including user's talk page so will see the disruption/removals.

If you do not reply in the next couple days or so, it is unlikely I will see it so please post a note on my talk page. Click the "talk'" link by my signature which will take you to my talk page where you can leave me a message. All you need to say is you responded and I will come here. S0091 (talk) 19:16, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

Update! With the help of another editor, this is now an article. See Lilly Yokoi. S0091 (talk) 15:43, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

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