User talk:69.125.96.92

Edit on Theranos

Hello, I noticed your edit in which you changed the text A couple weeks later to Within two weeks, citing a grammar fix. However, this isn't fixing the grammar. It is merely rewording it to mean within the 2 weeks instead of after 2 weeks. -- Cosmic (talk) 04:11, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Cosmic6811 Noting the dates on the sources provided, the two events occurred within two weeks of each other. "A couple" is both overly vague and overly informal. 69.125.96.92 (talk) 03:00, 29 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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