User talk:103.241.226.169

November 2019

Hello, I'm Dl2000. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Bhagat Pipa, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at the tutorial on citing sources, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Dl2000 (talk) 18:44, 3 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

August 2023

There are not much details in Draft:Elvish Yadav's career section so stop adding sub-sections. Ajeeb Prani (talk) 17:22, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I will add more later. 103.241.226.169 (talk) 17:33, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

They are only two lines about his Big Boss career, it doesn't look good. Ajeeb Prani (talk) 17:38, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, you are right. 103.241.226.169 (talk) 17:57, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Elvish Yadav has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Elvish Yadav. Thanks! Spinster300 (talk) 13:11, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Elvish Yadav (October 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Spinster300 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

It is likely that the subject is notable, but the article needs to be written from a neutral point of view, and needs to avoid fluffy descriptions and puffery. Kind regards, Spinster300 (talk) 16:59, 7 October 2023 (UTC).[reply]

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Spinster300 (talk) 16:59, 7 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, 103.241.226.169! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Spinster300 (talk) 16:59, 7 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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