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Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

  • Option 1
    • Article title
      • Psychoanalysis and Music
    • Article Evaluation
      • At the beginning of this article, there is a notion about the need of rewritten of the lead section. The first sentence of the lead section might not be a good beginning. It starts with a sentence telling the power of music instead of directly pointing out the two main topic of the article: psychoanalysis and music. Even though it mentions about how music "allows us to see beyond a typical conversation or thought process" which might imply to psychoanalysis, but it is hard for a reader who might not have any psychological background to relate to this. Moreover, the lead section is too short. Not much information is provided. It is hard for the reader to know the significant part which might be covered in this article.
      • The tone of the article is relatively neutral. Take the example in the section of History when Sigmund Freud is being described as the first attributor of psychoanalysis and music. It mentioned both "ambivalent" sides of Freud in the section, describing how he enjoyed and being inspired from music and how he self-defining as a "ganz unmusikalisch". Moreover, in the section, others' opinion and suspicion about Freud's intention of studying music is also mentioned to show more perspectives about the topic. However, in the later sections, "Theories and Therapeutic Techniques" and ''Case Studies and Real Life Experiences", only the positive effects and cases studies have been mentioned. I do not know whether there might be negative outcomes or findings and disadvantages being discovered among all the experiences that have been done on psychoanalysis and music. But when I, being a reader, read through these sections, I would be curious about whether music therapy is so effective in treating patients with mental illness because of all those benefits and advantages that are mentioned in this article (however music therapy is not often used in the treatment of mental illness). Overall, this article gives me the feeling that music therapy (psychoanalysis and music) is really helpful and effective in treating patients. I have the feeling of being persuade to believe that music therapy is good and efficient therapy without much supportive and critical evidences.
      • Only one image is posted on this article. It is a photo of the musicologist Max Graf, a torchbearer of the topic. This image is relevant to the topic and also correctly being posted in the History section while introducing Max Graf. However, this picture has not provide helps for the understanding of this article. For copyright of the image, the image does followed the regulations of Wikipedia's copyright as it is a work in public domain. However, the editor should add a tag of United States Public Domain to indicate this.
      • There are only two comments in the talk page. The first one is a question about whether this article is "even needed". Some editors doubted that no-one would edit this page into a "worthwhile " article. However, in 2020, this article is assigned into the "Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment". Students started to edit this page, which might imply that there is high possibility that the information in this article would largely improved in the future.
      • Overall，I think this is a good article for a brief understanding of the relationship between psychoanalysis and music therapy. Also it can be a good introduction for anyone who is interesting in music therapy or psychology and music as the writing and information is easy to understand for any readers even without psychological or musical background. However, the information provided in the article is not sufficient and it does not provide enough information on both sides of the therapy. Only positive outcomes, experiences, and advantages are mentioned in the article. This might be a result of lacking information in the field or the problem of this article
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