User:KC1200/Lipocalin 1/Narvikvaren Peer Review

Peer review

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

• KC1200
• Lipocalin 1

Lead

Lead evaluation

In the old article, the Lead is also all of the content. Adding your content will fix this, just be sure to include a little about what you add to the lead

Content

Content evaluation

Your content looks great! It seems like you've found just about all that's available and summarized it here.

Tone and Balance

Tone and balance evaluation

Your tone is great, very neutral and balanced.

Sources and References

Sources and references evaluation

Could be cited better, I don't see any citations in the text, and the sources might be better it they were APA formatted.

Organization

Organization evaluation

Organization looks great! just make sure the organization is good in the final article