User:Jamal.anthony/sandbox

Article Evaluation

In this article, Art history is relevant because it shows the different minds and important figures that have contributed to the history of art. There was not anything from this article that distracted me from carefully evaluating it. It was clear and straight forward to the point.

Most of the article is cited. However, there is some information that lacks citations Their were many citation throughout the article giving off the impression that the article has been edited multiple times and has had several editors. Adding a more accurate timeline to this article could improve the strength of this article. Timelines serves as a visual aid as well.

In addition, a better structure will improve how the article is put together. There were too many gaps in periods of time. As a result this causes doubt about periods of time for the readers.

Population Geography of Russia

The article mentions population in terms of where people live in the region. However, there is a lack of the characteristics of the Geography of Russia's population: birth rate, mortality, fertility and life expectancy. I will prove this by providing population pyramids that will show Russia's population more in depth. I also will include more visual representations of these trends by inserting maps within the article to show patterns from past, present and future predictions.

Here are a couple of links I plan on including:

this is a link that has information about Russia's population pyramid trends past and present.

this source has more information regarding pipulation pyramids as well as population, language growth rate, death rate, migration and more