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Renildo José dos Santos

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... that Renildo José dos Santos, a Brazilian councilman, was tragically murdered in 1993 after publicly declaring his bisexuality, and his murderers only started serving their sentences in 2015?

Source: "Acusado de mandar matar vereador de Coqueiro seco se entrega à polícia". Alagoas (in Brazilian Portuguese). 2015-11-12. Retrieved 2024-11-27.

ALT1: ... that Renildo José dos Santos, a Brazilian councilman, was murdered in 1993 after coming out as bisexual, and his legacy is honored with a human rights award in his name? Source: "Prêmio de Direitos Humanos Renildo José dos Santos acontece nesta terça em Maceió". Tribuna Hoje. Retrieved 2024-11-20.
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Comment: Despite its creation becoming almost seven days before today, it was expanded today.

Created by MikutoH (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

--MikutoH ^talk! 23:48, 27 November 2024 (UTC).

Comment: The first hook and some statements in the article may not meet WP:NPOV. TheBritinator (talk) 01:07, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

@TheBritinator: it may not be. But is it? You didn't state your perspective in a concrete way. --MikutoH ^talk! 17:21, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

I removed the apparent non-neutral POV~. Since it wasn't specified which part, now I think it's neutral. --MikutoH ^talk! 20:41, 1 December 2024 (UTC)

The hooks remain non-neutral and should be reworded. Full review would be left to TheBritinator or another editor:

ALT2 ... that Renildo José dos Santos, a Brazilian councilman, was murdered in 1993 after publicly coming out as bisexual? ("Tragically" is commentary that should be avoided per WP:WTW, the second seems to be commentary that might also not meet NPOV).

Tragic but sadly not uncommon, so I'm not sure if it's "unusual" enough to meet WP:DYKINT, so maybe other editor can chime in? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:40, 2 December 2024 (UTC)

@Narutolovehinata5: I would say ALT2 is good. TheBritinator ([[User talk:TheBritin --MikutoH ^talk! 21:01, 11 December 2024 (UTC)ator|talk]]) 16:08, 2 December 2024 (UTC)

I support ALT2 as well. --MikutoH ^talk! 21:01, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

Full review needed now that additional hooks have been proposed. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:50, 28 December 2024 (UTC)