Template:Did you know nominations/Orwa Nyrabia

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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 12:15, 2 September 2012 (UTC)

Orwa Nyrabia

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• ... that the DOX BOX International Documentary Film Festival, founded by Syrian filmmaker Orwa Nyrabia in 2008, quickly grew into the most important documentary film gathering in the Arab world?

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Created/expanded by Zozo2kx (talk). Self nom at 04:51, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

• Article has been deleted. -Zanhe (talk) 20:06, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

• Sorry, that was my mistake, I placed a delete request at the page by mistake. It will be restored shortly! Yazan (talk) 07:13, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
• Restored. Waiting for review. Yazan (talk) 12:31, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

IMDB is unreliable (but could be good as an external link). It must be replaced by another verifiable source. --George Ho (talk) 03:06, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

• IMDB is used to cite on one sentence, a very uncontroversial fact relating to him being an assistant director in a certain film, it has nothing to do with the hook. You make it sound as if the whole article is cited by IMDB. Yazan (talk) 03:15, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

• Replaced icon. Still, relevant or not, if all sources are reliable, then the article would be "good to go". --George Ho (talk) 03:22, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

• Replaced the IMDB reference with a different one. Yazan (talk) 03:23, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

I have removed the unverifiable year of his graduation. As long as there are no other problems, I guess it needs another reviewer. --George Ho (talk) 03:30, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

Article is (barely) long enough and new enough, is neutral and cites inline sources. However, the hook says "the most prestigious (festival)" while the source says "the largest and most significant", and I don't think they're the same. I understand the need to avoid close paraphrasing, but in this case I think too much accuracy is sacrificed. -Zanhe (talk) 05:19, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

I've changed "prestigious" to "important", and added more info to the article. Does that work? Yazan (talk) 05:50, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for your fast response. Good to go now. -Zanhe (talk) 05:53, 30 August 2012 (UTC)