Template:Did you know nominations/Ms. Marvel (Kamala Khan)
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Rcsprinter (tell me stuff) @ 21:53, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
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Ms. Marvel (Kamala Khan)
[edit]- ... that Kamala Khan, also known as Ms. Marvel, is the first Muslim character to headline her own comic book at Marvel Comics?
- Reviewed: Sidney Risenberg
Created by TriiipleThreat (talk). Self nominated at 15:09, 8 November 2013 (UTC).
- The following has been checked in this review by Matty.007
- QPQ taken care of
- Article created by TriiipleThreat on 7 November 2013, and has 4429 characters of readable prose
- Every paragraph is sourced
- Earwig @ Toolserver found no copyvios
- Hook is interesting and well sourced
- Only thing I would say is that there are loads of quotes, over 1 per paragraph; so my opinion is to cut down on the quotes
I think that there need to be a few less quotes, and perhaps a blockquote for the longer quote. Matty.007 17:27, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
- Perhaps, but I find that it is useful to hear the creator's own words. Also the longest quote is blocked, the rest our only a couple of sentences.--TriiipleThreat (talk) 17:35, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
Sorry, I missed the block. However, there are a few quotes that are "more than about 40 words or a few hundred characters", but I don't think that that should hold up the DYK. Therefore, this is good to go. Matty.007 18:05, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
