Template:Did you know nominations/Mrs Howard Paul

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The result was: promoted by Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:08, 15 May 2014 (UTC)

Mrs Howard Paul

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... that Mrs Howard Paul created the role of Lady Sangazure in The Sorcerer by Gilbert and Sullivan?

The article meets all criteria and looks good. My only qualm is that the hook doesn't seem particularly "hooky." What about something a little more bizarre, like:

... that Mrs Howard Paul sang the role of a woman "cruelly deceived by the Footman who wore false whiskers"?
... that Mrs Howard Paul was acclaimed for impersonating tenors?

Those are just suggestions, but you get the idea. Good luck with this one!--Lemuellio (talk) 14:43, 14 May 2014 (UTC)

Created by Jack1956 (talk) Ssilvers (talk). Self nominated at 20:03, 1 May 2014 (UTC).

Either of those ALTs are fine with me and Jack. Or, if you prefer:

... that after originating the role of Lady Sangazure in The Sorcerer, Mrs Howard Paul walked out of the cast of H.M.S. Pinafore when her part was reduced?

-- Ssilvers (talk) 15:38, 14 May 2014 (UTC)

An excellent suggestion! Any of the three work for me; you and Jack can choose whichever you like best. Well done!--Lemuellio (talk) 17:35, 14 May 2014 (UTC)

Approved with the following hook:

... that after originating the role of Lady Sangazure in The Sorcerer, Mrs Howard Paul walked out of the cast of H.M.S. Pinafore when her part was reduced?

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