Template:Did you know nominations/MBM scandal
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The result was: promoted by PanydThe muffin is not subtle 11:50, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
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MBM scandal
[edit]- ... that the MBM scandal led to the creation of the Massachusetts Senate's Ethics Committee?
- Reviewed: Ross McEwan.
Created by Hirolovesswords (talk). Self nominated at 03:20, 25 March 2014 (UTC).
- the article does not explicitly state the hook fact with a citation ... assuming it is this line - "On February 11, Senator Joseph DiCarlo and Representatives Ralph Sirianni and William F. Hogan filed an order for the creation of a joint committee to investigate circumstance surrounding the awarding of the contract to MBM." cited to the Boston Globe (I will AGF on the validity on the offline source, but want to make sure that this is correct). It needs to explicitly state the hook fact, Hirolovesswords. Everything else looks good, I believe. Go Phightins! 23:12, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
- The fact is stated in the "Senate Ethics Committee investigation" section: "As a result of the scandal, the Senate created a standing committee on ethics." --Hirolovesswords (talk) 23:51, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
