The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by HalfGigtalk 03:37, 15 February 2017 (UTC)
Overall: The article is a little sparse, being taken up mainly by a plot summary that badly needs paragraphs and copyediting. The lead also needs copyediting, especially the 2nd paragraph. The hook is generally interesting, but I'm not sure it's an attention grabber. Other than those items, everything else is good. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 00:35, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
Thank you for the review. The "lead" and plot are translated from the French article, - thanks for the recommendation to get better than the original. Will think about it but not right now. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:17, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
@Gerda Arendt: I reworked the lead a bit to show you what I mean. It should only take a few minutes to sort out the plot section. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 18:26, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
Thank you! - I am German and know little French, LouisAlain is French, - how about you make it English and we include you among the contributors? - I was annoyed by a red link in Poulenc's works, and am busy filling the next. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:57, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
@Gerda Arendt: Well, I'm reviewing it so I can't very well be a contributor. However, I've reworded the plot summary for you, split it into paragraphs, and reworded one other sentence later in the article. Can you think of any other possible hooks? Perhaps something like this?
Thank you ;) - The ALT makes me sigh, though, "veteran" not in the article, + I always want the subject an early link. If you think that actors of an older generation are not attractive, stop before they come in.
ALT2: ... that Jean Anouilh's play Léocadia, one of his pièces roses, was staged on Broadway as Time Remembered? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:46, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
The article is a little sparse, being taken up mainly by a plot summary that badly needs paragraphs and copyediting. The lead also needs copyediting, especially the 2nd paragraph. The hook is generally interesting, but I'm not sure it's an attention grabber. Other than those items, everything else is good. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 00:35, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
However, I've reworded the plot summary for you, split it into paragraphs, and reworded one other sentence later in the article. Can you think of any other possible hooks? Perhaps something like this?
I like ALT2. I think we're good to go. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 20:07, 10 February 2017 (UTC)