Template:Did you know nominations/Joseph Goldsborough Bruff

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The result was: promoted by Keilana|^{Parlez ici} 01:53, 21 August 2015 (UTC)

Joseph Goldsborough Bruff

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Self-portrait of J.G. Bruff

... that in 1849, J. Goldsborough Bruff (pictured) led an expedition of sixty-six men to California for the purpose of mining gold and conducting trade?

Reviewed: Elephantomyia baltica

5x expanded by Orygun (talk). Self-nominated at 23:24, 25 July 2015 (UTC).

Article is long enough, new enough, and appears to be well-cited. Hook is interesting, and directly cited in-text. AGF on the book sources. The picture is great, and correctly licensed. GorillaWarfare (talk) 19:01, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

Each fact contained in this hook needs an in-line citation at the end of the sentence that contains it, as per the DYK criteria. I'm not seeing in-line citations for the sixty-six men or the purpose of the expedition. ~ Rob^Talk 12:14, 10 August 2015 (UTC)

I've added 2 more in-line citations.--Orygun (talk) 04:50, 13 August 2015 (UTC)

AGF on offline source. Now good to go with the additional in-line citations. Thanks Orygun. ~ Rob^Talk 06:05, 13 August 2015 (UTC)