Template:Did you know nominations/Jim Dempster

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:35, 4 August 2018 (UTC)

Jim Dempster

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... that British surgeon Jim Dempster produced more than 100 scientific articles on kidney transplantation in dogs?

Reviewed: Acrocnida brachiata

Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 09:43, 22 July 2018 (UTC).

@Philafrenzy: The article was new enough when nominated, it is long enough, and the hook is cited. But, it seems that QPQ has not been completed, and there is a tiny bit of an issue with closely paraphrasing this website. Other than that, I would add "scientific" before "articles" in the hook. RileyBugz^{私に叫ぼう}_私の編集 15:44, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

Thank you @RileyBugz:. QPQ done. Done some re-phrasing and "scientific" ok so added. Whispyhistory (talk) 16:18, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

– looks good to go! Nice job on the article, too. RileyBugz^{私に叫ぼう}_私の編集 16:42, 24 July 2018 (UTC)