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@לילך5: thank you for creating this article. I have a few suggestions.
If he is known in Israel by a Hebrew name, add this to the lead sentence. Look at biographical articles of prominent people with Hebrew names for the conventional way of doing this.
Specify more years, including when he was on the TV shows and and when he opened his businesses
Several Google hits describe a TV show called The Next Restaurant of Israel. Is this the same show as Israel's next restaurant, and is there an 'official' translation? Either way, I would expect Israel's Next Restaurant to have capital letters.
Describe Captain Curry - is it a restaurant or a food shop?
Explain Gindi TLV. Does TLV mean Tel Aviv? Is Gindi a suburb? Remember that you are writing for an international audience.
Does the source say where we studied in New York or Cannes? Was the New York school a high school or a music college - we should certainly say if he studied at the Juilliard School. Did he specialise in a musical instrument?
Where this is no English Wikipedia article to link to, you can set up a conditional link to Hebrew Wikipedia (or any other language edition), see Template:Interlanguage link. This might help Hebrew-speaking readers.
The article reads as a list of facts, please try to write in a more flowing style. I have made a couple of changes to try to improve this.
I added the Hebrew name, and the seasons. המסעדה הבאה is written both as The Next Restaurant of Israel and as Israel's next restaurant, I don't know if there is something official, the show is in Hebrew, not in English.---Lilach5 (לילך5) discuss19:43, 20 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
