Talk:Washington State Route 538

Washington State Route 538 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

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Date	Process	Result
October 10, 2009	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review

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Comments:

In the lead, is it really important to have a sentence indicating Mount Vernon is the county seat of Skagit County?
In sentence "The highway, which has existed as a county road since 1911, travels from Interstate 5 (I-5) in the west, passing former U.S. Route 99 (US 99), now Riverside Drive and Skagit Valley College's main Mount Vernon campus before terminating at a roundabout with SR 9.", add comma after "Riverside Drive".
From what I see, SR 538 was originally SSH 1G, not SSH 3G. This needs to be fixed in the lead.
"the Mount Vernon campus of the Skagit Valley College is passed on the north side of the highway" sounds awkward.
"The I-5 freeway wasn't built until after 1966": do not use contractions.
"spring 2009": do not use seasons as it is assumes readers are from northern hemisphere.
Citation needed for mileage in Major intersections table.

I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 15:42, 10 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done –CG 15:56, 10 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 16:06, 10 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]