Talk:Vs. (Pearl Jam album)

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• All song titles serve as redirects to this album, have their own pages, or have been placed at the appropriate disambiguation pages.--Hraefen ^Talk 18:59, 31 August 2006 (UTC)

Allbum Name

Someone PLEASE explain why its called Vs.! I don't see that in the cover, spine, back, booklet, or CD. So why isn't it selftitled? Redwolf24 7 July 2005 04:49 (UTC)

It does in fact say "Vs." next to "Pearl Jam" on the jewel case spine. --Kevin McManus 20:36, July 18, 2005 (UTC)

Don't see it. Redwolf24 11:00, 20 August 2005 (UTC)

I scanned a copy: Vs. case spine --Kevin McManus 21:16, September 6, 2005 (UTC)

This is interesting. It's not on the cover of the CD I have here, so maybe there are different versions? Straal 22:37, 6 September 2005 (UTC)

In Utero

"Vs.'s competing album In Utero by Nirvana sold half as much as much as Vs. due to it's continous noise songs"

This sort of thing doesn't belong in any article. For a few reasons. It's inaccurate, 7 mil vs. 5 mil does not equal half as much. Why is it a competing album? This should be noted. "due to it's continuous noise songs" is without any source, completely biased, and also untrue.

Most Sold in a week

"Pearl Jam will always hold the title for most albums sold in the first five days" - I have changed this as it reads like a prediction; changing to "still hold the record"... problem is, this may not be true. Who knows if those f*cking boy band albums sold more copies in their first five days?

Look unless someone can come up with a source that backs that they sold most album in a week it should be removed from the article. Honestly I think U2 sold over 1 million copies in their first week back in the 80s with their Joshua Tree.--70.129.55.17 08:22, 8 June 2006 (UTC)

a nod to...

the "Album Title" section uses the phrase "a nod to" twice in two sentences. its anoyying. go figure :)... why is this in a box ?????? im confused sorry121.217.241.224 (talk) 09:24, 15 January 2008 (UTC)

GA Review

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Lead

• "Vs. is the second album" Should that be studio album?
  • Well, even if we're not going by studio albums, it's still their second album.-5- (talk) 00:28, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
• "Ten (1991)" I'd be tempted to alter this to "Ten, released in 1991,"
• "the longest duration by a Pearl Jam album" Perhaps "for" a Pearl Jam album?
  • Adressed.-5- (talk) 00:29, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Recording

• "The first week of recording produced "Rats", "Blood", "Go", and "Leash" before the band hit a lull" Do you have a ref for this?
  • Addressed.-5- (talk) 00:28, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Music

• "The songs on the album tackle personal as well as social and political concerns. Topics on the album include child abuse ("Daughter"), gun culture ("Glorified G"), police racism ("W.M.A."), and the media ("Blood")." This sentence seems to sum up the rest of the paragraph. I would be tempted to put most of this in the lead, but also explain the police racism and media topics in this section.

Release

• "first released some time in the late 1990s" very informal. If you don't know the exact date, simply put "first released during the late 1990s"
  • Addressed.-5- (talk) 15:31, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
• "Had Soundscan counted all seven days, the album would have sold more than 1,000,000 copies in its first week." Have you got a reference for this?
  • I never added this sentence, so I don't know where the editor who added this got his or her information from. This sentence was there before I really got to work on this article. I have no problem removing the unreferenced stuff if it could be a problem.-5- (talk) 00:36, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Imagery

• Do you know why they decided against naming the album "Five against one"?
  • I believe I read that they didn't want focus to be placed on any one particular song, because that line comes from the song "Animal", but I can't remember where I read this.-5- (talk) 00:42, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
• Do you have references for all the differences?
  • Most, if not all of the information could probably be attained from pjcollectors.com.-5- (talk) 00:44, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Vs Tour

• What are scalpers? Is there a wikilink?
  • Ticket scalpers. I went ahead and linked it to ticket resale.-5- (talk) 00:42, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Outtakes

• Do you have a ref for Whipping being cut? Do you know why it was cut?
  • I don't know why it was cut. The song was debuted on May 13, 1993, the same time as the other songs from Vs. The version of the song from the Vs. sessions can be found at gremmie.net.-5- (talk) 00:42, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Chart positions

• I'd be tempted to add an extra column to the position tables to put the specific refs in, rather than have a long list at the top.
  • The Ten and Vitalogy articles have the same thing, and they're listed as good articles.-5- (talk) 00:42, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
    • I'd recommend doing it to all the Pearl Jam album articles; it makes it more convenient for readers to find citations. WesleyDodds (talk) 05:40, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
      • Addressed.-5- (talk) 07:47, 30 July 2008 (UTC)

General

• Where relevant, I would wikilink songs when they're first mentioned as well as the track listing section.
  • Addressed.-5- (talk) 00:51, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
• Numbers and their units should be separated with non-breaking spaces, e.g. 950,378 copies.
  • Addressed.-5- (talk) 15:33, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

A bit to do, but nothing substantial, so I'll put it on hold. Peanut4 (talk) 00:09, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Re-review

• (Lead) "Ten (1991)" I'd be tempted to alter this to "Ten, released in 1991,"
  • Addressed.-5- (talk) 01:58, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
• (Music) "The songs on the album tackle personal as well as social and political concerns. Topics on the album include child abuse ("Daughter"), gun culture ("Glorified G"), police racism ("W.M.A."), and the media ("Blood")." This sentence seems to sum up the rest of the paragraph. I would be tempted to put most of this in the lead, but also explain the police racism and media topics in this section.
• (Release) "Had Soundscan counted all seven days, the album would have sold more than 1,000,000 copies in its first week." Have you got a reference for this?"
  • No. I went ahead and removed it.-5- (talk) 04:03, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
• (Imagery) The differences section needs referencing.
  • Addressed.-5- (talk) 04:32, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Most of it is the points that haven't been addressed up till now. Some of the other points are fine at GA stage. Peanut4 (talk) 22:15, 30 July 2008 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

I'll pass it, but as per my comments above, I think some of the issues tackled in the songs, should be in the lead, and then more in depth analysis in the main body of the article. Maybe an idea for expansion if you wanted to take this article any further. Also could do with more images. But otherwise, looks okay. Well done. Peanut4 (talk) 14:05, 10 August 2008 (UTC)

Chicago Sun-Times review

Transcription using Google News Advanced News Archive Search. Chicago Sun-Times (DeRogatis, Jim. 7. October 17, 1993) review of Vs. (1993):

Dan56 (talk) 00:23, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

Rolling Stone Album Guide review

Four out of five star review. Transcription using Amazon.com Preview Browser: Template:Quote

Dan56 (talk) 00:33, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

USA Today review

Transcription using Google News Advanced News Archive Search. USA Today (Gundersen, Edna. 01.D. October 15, 1993) review of Vs. (1993):

Dan56 (talk) 00:23, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

Album title is a reference to Mission of Burma?

Does anyone have a reputable source which confirms/denies the name connection between this album, and the Mission of Burma album? I've always been of the understanding that the title was a reference to that seminal 1980s album.

Would be nice to get a sentence, backed by a reputable source, which confirms or denies this. Stuart mcmillen (talk) 03:25, 6 October 2013 (UTC)

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Problems With Songwriting Citations

There are serious, glaring problems with the citations used in this article, and other Pearl Jam album wikis, to claim specific band members wrote the songs on this album. In many of these cases, Wiki editors have misconstrued or exaggerated information from interviews to make unfounded claims that single band members wrote all the music of a song that is credited to the entire band.

For example: 1. This wiki claims Dave Abbruzzese wrote the entirety of the music for the song "Go." It then links as its citation to an interview where Abbruzzese describes bringing an initial version of the song to the band, who then wrote and recorded the final version together. "With "Go," I just happened to pick up the guitar at the right moment. Stone asked what I was playing and started playing it, then Jeff stared playing it, and Eddie started singing with it, and it turned into a song. That's basically how all or most of our songs come about." Wiki editors have taken their own unfounded position that Abbruzzese wrote the song without any concrete evidence, and ignored the fact that Pearl Jam officially credits the music to the band. If someone wants to add text to the "Music and Lyrics" section of this wiki that notes Abbruzzese brought the original version of the song to the band, that can be done. But falsely crediting a song to someone based on your own editorialized perception of an interview is in violation of pretty much everything that drives Wikipedia. 2. This wiki claims Stone Gossard wrote the entirety of the music for the song "Animal." It then links as its citation to an "Unofficial Pearl Jam History" fan page — not a reliable source — that nevertheless does not claim Gossard wrote the song. It merely says he, Jeff Ament, and Matt Cameron (who was in Soundgarden at the time) *recorded* — it doesn't specify who wrote it — a demo of the song prior to Pearl Jam's formation. 3. The wiki claims Gossard wrote the entirety of the music for the song "Daughter" and cites a fan newsletter that only states that Gossard used a specific guitar to write the song — the citation says nothing about whether he wrote the song by himself. 4. This wiki claims Gossard and Mike McCready wrote the music to "Glorified G" and then cites as its source an article where this claim is not made at all — in fact, McCready is quoted as saying he and Gossard wrote *parts* of the song — not the whole of it, so this is just a blatantly false reading of the source.

This goes on and on and seems to be rife throughout Pearl Jam's album wikis. These unreliable, misinterpreted and often false sources should be removed. Icanttalkaboutit (talk) 13:15, 5 July 2023 (UTC)

Official Release Date

This album was widely released on Oct 19 1993, the same day as Rush's Counterparts. Anecdotal evidence means nothing, but I was at the store on the day of release along with my friend, he for Counterparts and me for Vs. All the reviews are just days before the release date, from advance copies. None are anywhere near Oct 5th. The RIAA is being considered here all by itself as some encyclopedic source that trumps all others, when every other source including not just the band's official website but sources like Billboard (who show that on the week of release Pearl Jam and Rush came in at numbers one and two) show Oct 19th as the release date. These are trusted sources, and together they show consensus. One single source cannot trump a consensus of reliable sources. In the archive of Billboard's Nov 6th newsweekly, on page 14, there is an article about Pearl Jam and Nirvana on their music's staying power which notes that Vs. was released on Oct 19th. It also mentions on the same page in another editorial that they released the vinyl one week early (Oct 12). I trust this will end the ongoing edit war. Source: https://www.worldradiohistory.com/Archive-All-Music/Billboard/90s/1993/BB-1993-11-06.pdf Dobyblue (talk) 14:49, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

Consider it over. Billboard PDF is reliable, RIAA too, but the band's official website is not. In the end, the magazine trumps the RIAA. Btw, I know that the RIAA fails many times, but it's still more reliable than most sources. SpaceHelmetX1 (talk) 00:14, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

Vs. footnote (or head note)

this album Vs. was originally called "Five Against One"

A double entendre(maybe5 entendre) Five members of Pearl Jam

Five album contract (with epic records) Five fingers on a hand Five fingers to make a fist Five fists to fight the music industry Whom demanded they "fit the mold of the alternative grunge band by which they had to "look a certain way"

which is also why there were no videos from 5/1_VS. In which the band appeared and forward from Vitology onward

This is precursor for long battle between PJ and biG brother in several manifestations.

sorry for this long entry, but I had no other way to tell you only the "5 against one" true tit

.and become a another tool for them is a very long story which most true fans will know 2601:47:100:C2C0:A591:650F:8785:C7FA (talk) 03:45, 6 January 2024 (UTC)