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Ad: "After two years of commitment and hard work", "which sported a huge crowd response", and "came back stronger and hungrier than ever" are what mainly stood out. There's probably a lot more as well.
More citations: Pretty much every paragraph in the body has at least one unsourced claim. Every single release, the EP release, and especially claims like "This song has become one of their top tracks with over 4.5 Million streams on Spotify and other streaming services", definitely need sourcing. Anything less obvious than WP:THESKYISBLUE, essentially.
Cleanup: MOS:TITLECAPS, MOS:DATERANGE, missing punctuation, random double spaces, overall sentence structure (which reads like the writer may not speak English as their first language, but that's just conjecture on my part), and probably much more. I hate to say "basically everything", but it's a crap ton.

And that's just what I could find after skimming now because I was asked to clarify on my talk page. QuietHere (talk | contributions) 14:46, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Though I will point out that it didn't take too much effort and could have been done without the treatise above. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 15:12, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]