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Reviewer: Keresluna (talk · contribs) 04:21, 7 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    c. (OR):
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):
    b. (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

@Praseodymium-141: I will take on the review, however, it will take me awhile to read the whole article.

Thanks for taking up the review! I might not be very free over the next few weeks, so I might take some time to respond to comments. 141Pr {contribs} 07:49, 8 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

General comments

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 Done 141Pr {contribs} 07:49, 8 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the safety section, 'results has recently been disputed', Avoid 'recently' and add a specific time frame.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 11:48, 8 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the history section, 'variety of colors, and as a result he named the' add a comma between 'result' and 'he'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 07:49, 8 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the history section, 'most vanadium ore was' replace 'ore was' with 'ores were'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 07:49, 8 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the history section, 'by American Vanadium Company from'; add 'the' between 'by' and 'American'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 07:49, 8 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the compounds section, '2–5. In aqueous solution'; add 'an' between 'In' and 'aqueous'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 07:49, 8 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is this written in British or American English? I saw the word 'colour' in the compounds section which is a British English word.
I have fixed the issues that I could find. If there is any I missed, please can you point it out to me so I can fix it? 141Pr {contribs} 11:48, 8 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Would be nice if you specified which dialect of English it is on in the talk page. Keres🌕Luna edits! 13:53, 9 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 15:13, 9 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the oxyanion section, 'phosphate.[23] Beside that, this anion'; replace 'Beside' with 'Besides'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 15:56, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the oxyanion section, 'with activity of some specific'; add 'the' between 'with' and 'activity'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 15:56, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the oxyanion section, 'predominant at vanadium concentration'; add 'a' between 'predominant' and 'vanadium'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 15:56, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the halide derivatives section, 'for polymerization of dienes' add 'the' between 'for' and 'polymerization'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 15:56, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the organometallic compounds section, add 'the' at the start of the section.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 15:56, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the organometallic compounds section, replace 'well developed' with 'well-developed'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 15:56, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
 Done - added reason in the article. 141Pr {contribs} 17:08, 14 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the occurrence section, 'the 20th century a large', add a comma between 'century' and 'large'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the occurrence section, 'discovered, the Minas Ragra' add 'in' between 'discovered' and 'the'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the occurrence section, add a hyphen between the words 'two thirds'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the occurrence section, no need for a comma between 'slag' and 'and'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the occurrence section, remove 'in' in the phrase 'bauxite and in deposits'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the alloy section, 'aluminium' is British-English, replace with 'aluminum'. There is two times that this happens in this section, change accordingly.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Reverted by DePiep because WP:ALUM. 141Pr {contribs} 17:09, 14 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the other uses section, 'Batteries of the type were', replace 'the' with 'this'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the other uses section, add a hyphen between 'lithium' and 'ion'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the biological roles section, 'marine environments than terrestrial.' add 'ones' after 'terrestrial'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the vanadoenzymes section, perhaps replace 'A number of species' with 'Several'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Vanadium accumulation in tunicates section, add a hyphen between 'vanadium' and 'binding'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Mammals section, replace 'have' with 'has'.
I think 'have' is the right word here because it is plural. 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the research section, 'treatment effects, but' remove a comma between 'effects' and 'but'. Also, no need for a comma after 'biosignature'.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I think that would be it for my grammar and prose comments. Keres🌕Luna edits! 15:54, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Images

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  • Recommend changing the vanadium pentoxide image to something more high quality, such as Vanadium pentoxide powder.jpg.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 16:21, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Perhaps too many images in the Production section, maybe remove one image.
 Done: Removed etched piece of vanadium. 141Pr {contribs} 16:21, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Facts

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  • The phrase 'It is oxidized in air at about 933 K (660 °C, 1220 °F), although an oxide passivation layer forms even at room temperature.' is unreferenced.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 19:42, 14 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • The phrase 'Electron capture is the main decay mode for isotopes lighter than 51V. For the heavier ones, the most common mode is beta decay. The electron capture reactions lead to the formation of element 22 (titanium) isotopes, while beta decay leads to element 24 (chromium) isotopes.' is unreferenced too.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 17:08, 14 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Same problem here: 'Vanadic acid, H3VO4 exists only at very low concentrations because protonation of the tetrahedral species [H2VO4]− results in the preferential formation of the octahedral [VO2(H2O)4]+ species. In strongly acidic solutions, pH < 2, [VO2(H2O)4]+ is the predominant species, while the oxide V2O5 precipitates from solution at high concentrations. The oxide is formally the acid anhydride of vanadic acid. The structures of many vanadate compounds have been determined by X-ray crystallography.'
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 19:42, 14 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • The first part of the section Halide Derivatives is unreferenced.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 17:08, 14 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 17:08, 14 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the late responses, I have been working on my own GAN, but I am free now. Here are some more comments. Keres🌕Luna edits! 15:47, 16 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  • Second paragraph of the oxyanion section still looks unreferenced.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 19:16, 16 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Last sentence of the halide derivatives section still is unreferenced.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 19:16, 16 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Same comment for the coordination compounds section.
 Done 141Pr {contribs} 19:16, 16 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References

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Page number needed: 2, 6, 12, 29, 32, 38, 39, 40, 45, 46

Fix dead link: 67

Still doing this... Keres🌕Luna edits! 03:25, 19 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I don't have access to most of the refs, so I don't know if I'll be able to do this one... 141Pr {contribs} 07:38, 19 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Some of them are journal articles, the page number should be there freely available when you click on the doi link. Keres🌕Luna edits! 13:43, 19 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Praseodymium-141: I see that the refs have been cleaned up by another person. I don't see any more issues, so I will pass this article. Keres🌕Luna edits! 23:22, 19 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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