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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 13:30, 5 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Will do. YE Pacific Hurricane 13:30, 5 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Typhoon Nangka was a large and strong tropical cyclone impacting central Japan in July 2015. " to "Typhoon Nangka was a large and strong tropical cyclone that impacted central Japan in July 2015. " ("cyclone impacting" just does not sound right). YE Pacific Hurricane
  • "where heavy rainfall reached 740 mm (29 in) in Kamikitayama, Nara Prefecture." "heavy" and the amount just seems redundant. YE Pacific Hurricane
  • "On July 6 after shear diminished, Nangka began to quickly intensify as it developed an eye in the center of the blossoming convection." wikilink eye. YE Pacific Hurricane
  • "Nearly half of the nation's capital, Majuro, were left without power." shoudln't it be was since "nation's capital" is singular?
  • "Some coastal flooding was also noted,[27] causing crop damage.[28]" the noting of flooding caused crop damage? YE Pacific Hurricane
  • "Across Japan, strong waves and high winds killed over 11,000 tons" imperial or metric? YE Pacific Hurricane
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