Talk:Twilight's Kingdom

Twilight's Kingdom has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: July 24, 2021. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Twilight's Kingdom appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 14 August 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that a fight in My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic episode "Twilight's Kingdom" has been compared to Dragon Ball Z?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2021/August. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Twilight's Kingdom.

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Vincent Tong

Is Vincent Tong's roles in 'Guest Voices' really necessary? He's always played voices in the series, background ponies and such. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Frontdoor6 (talk • contribs) 23:18, 14 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 6 July 2015

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68.230.99.47 (talk) 21:31, 6 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. JustBerry (talk) 22:38, 8 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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When will it no longer be protected? --68.230.99.47 (talk) 21:31, 6 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:00, 23 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Add a short description and WP:ALT text to the image.

Done

Non-free use rationale looks good.

Thank you

However, I would suggest changing the image to one of Tirek, as the article contains commentary of his appearance.

Done

Remove the links to Canada and the United States.

Done

"animated television series My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" → "animated television series My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" – (WP:SEAOFBLUE)

Done

"The two-part finale" → "The two-part season finale"

Done

"airing as an back-to-back" → "airing back-to-back"

Done (by another user)

"who praised villain" → "who praised the villain"

Done (by another user)

(from "[[My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic (season 4)#ep66|Princess]] [[My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic (season 4)#ep67|Twilight Sparkle]]") – see WP:EASTEREGG. Suggest changing it to (from "[[My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic (season 4)#ep66|Princess Twilight Sparkle]]") as we can trust a reader's knowledge of scrolling down.

Fixed

Plot section: Part one is 342 words and part two is 397 so this passes MOS:TVPLOT.
Remove the comma after "the edge of Ponyville".

Done

"and a tail of a horse" → "and tail of a horse"

Done

"since humans did not exist in Friendship Is Magic" → "since humans do not exist in Friendship Is Magic" – see MOS:TENSE

Done (by another user)

"more similarity of a bull" → "more similarity to a bull"

Done (by another user)

"a good flow of one to the next" → "a good flow from one to the next"

Done

Archive sources (you can use this automatic tool).

Already done: The tool didn't make any modifications as far as I can see.

Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:56, 23 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments, Some Dude From North Carolina. I have hopefully addressed them and if there are any other changes I should make, please feel free to let me know! Pamzeis (talk) 01:29, 24 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Chipmunkdavis (talk) 15:28, 10 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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... that a fight in My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic episode "Twilight's Kingdom" has been compared to Dragon Ball Z? Source: [1]
- ALT1:... that when designing Lord Tirek, the villain in "Twilight's Kingdom", Phil Caesar of DHX Media consulted his ten-year-old daughter? Source: My Little Pony: The Art of Equestria. p. 106

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Potential Tropical Cyclone Ten

Improved to Good Article status by Pamzeis (talk). Self-nominated at 05:14, 29 July 2021 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
Interesting:
Other problems:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: GA article is new enough and meets all requirements. qpq is done. Both hooks are cited and interesting. Assuming good faith on offline sources. BuySomeApples (talk) 20:29, 30 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

To T:DYK/P4