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Do we know the full names of "S. James and J. Wirrick"? Also, both of these people aren't mention anywhere else in the article.
The lead needs to be expanded a bit to summarize all the major sections.
UK should be spelled out the first time mentioned.
The "Personnel" section should use a medium dash (–) not the small dash.
The track listings should have track times.
"close friend of Minogue" I think it should be "Minogue's".
"compared recording "Touch Me Like That" to "best chocolate cake you ever ate" " is missing a "the". Even though it's a quote, it should still make sense grammatically.
And that's it! I've put the article on hold, which gives you 7 days. Let me know when you think you've addressed my concerns. Drewcifer (talk) 23:44, 16 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I think I've fixed everything. James and Wirrick are the writers of "You Make Me Feel (Mighty Real)" and are credited because of the sampling. I added that James originally performed the song and co-wrote it. -- Underneath-it-All (talk) 02:26, 17 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Few things still unaddressed: Wirrick isn't mentioned anywhere but in the lead (which shouldn't introduce info not in the article somewhere else). Also, the lead does not mention the music video. Drewcifer (talk) 04:18, 17 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]