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Nominator: Locust member (talk · contribs) 13:59, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: CarbonLollipop (talk · contribs) 03:44, 30 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for doing this! Locust member (talk) 14:33, 30 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'll be reviewing this article. CarbonLollipop (talk)

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Prose

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  • The album was produced by Lusi with contributions from the Clibbo, Loesoe, Outtatown, Rip, and Rok. The "the" seems like a mistake.
Green tickY Locust member (talk) 22:37, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Lyrically, the album explores themes of love, illusions, and existentialism using Auto-Tuned vocals. This phrasing feels a bit awkward to me.
Green tickY changed to "Using Auto-Tuned vocals, the album explores themes of love, illusions, and existentialism." Locust member (talk) 22:37, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • The Fool was considered one of the best albums of the year by The Fader and Dazed and further received acclaim by Pitchfork and laut.de. I would add a comma after "Dazed", and would write received further acclaim instead of further received acclaim.
Green tickY Locust member (talk) 22:37, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Background and release
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  • After Bladee released two solo cloud rap albums in Exeter and 333 during 2020, he and the musician Mechatok released the collaborative album Good Luck later in 2020. Good Luck featured a sound that delved more into electronic dance music. The phrasing of the first sentence could be improved; you could try something like In 2020, Bladee released two solo cloud rap albums, Exeter and 333. Later that year, he collaborated with musician Mechatok on Good Luck, an album that delved more into electronic dance music.
Green tickY Locust member (talk) 22:37, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Composition
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  • Green checkmarkY All good!
Critical reception
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  • Green checkmarkY All good!
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  • Green checkmarkY The article meets criteria 2a.

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  • On the track, Bladee's voice switches between a "whispered scream" and a rapped falsetto. The copyvio tool picked this sentence up; I suggest rephrasing it, attributing it to The Miscellany News, or simply removing it.
Green tickY I attributed it Locust member (talk) 22:37, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Original research

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  • Green checkmarkY All statements are supported by citations.

Other issues

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  • Thaiboy Digital is featured on "Inspiration Comes", a track in which the production was described as "major" by Li. In the Hypebeast article, Li was saying that The Fool had a lot of production from Lusi.
Green tickY Looks really obvious now that you mention it...🤦‍♂️ I replaced with a description of the song's lyrics from laut.de Locust member (talk) 22:52, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Other

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  • Green checkmarkY No issues with neutrality or stability. The album cover is included under fair use.
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