Talk:The Fairies' Hallowe'en/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 16:24, 15 June 2015 (UTC)
Continuing my sweep JAGUAR 16:24, 15 June 2015 (UTC)
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Checking against the GA criteria
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
- I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD
- Nothing on the Production in the lead, despite the section being scarce the lead must summarise, even if it's minor
- The plot summary in the lead is quite extensive
- Is the list of people in the production sentence a definite list of people who worked on the film? The lead says otherwise
- The lead could be expanded a little in order to summarise
- "as a young girl who plays with a jack-o-lantern crafted by her father" - this sentence is a run-on
- "As she awakes, she mourns that it was all a dream" - is "mourns" a good choice of a word here? I would write "realises"
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- The assertions regarding the cameramen could be original research, but both candidates are included in the reference given.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Well researched and well written, once again. Nothing major so it can be put on hold. I am passing this on the grounds of good research. JAGUAR 11:24, 16 June 2015 (UTC)