Talk:The Catch II/GA1

GA Review

Passed. BigChrisKenney (talk) 05:21, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Nominator: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 22:15, 21 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: BigChrisKenney (talk · contribs) 06:48, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, @Gonzo fan2007: My senior in GA reviews and articles! This will be my first sports related GA review, but I'm sure we can get the article passed. BigChrisKenney (talk) 06:48, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Initial assesment

Intro

Good!

Background

"San Francisco won 6 out of their last 8 games, although it was not enough to overcome the Atlanta Falcons, who won the NFC West."

If you take out the appositive, the sentence reads -San Francisco who won the NFC West. A rephrase such as; "San Franciso won 6 out of their last 8 games, but lost the NFC West to the Atlanta Falcons." Or something similar might be better.

Reworded. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:26, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Game summary

First half

Made some edits you may wish to review.

Looks good! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:17, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Second half

Made some edits you may wish to review.

Looks good! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:17, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The play

Made some edits you may wish to review.

Looks good! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:17, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

End of the game

Good!

Box score

Good!

Analysis

Good!

Officiating

Good!

Owen's struggles

"Owens, on his performance up to this point, after the game described it thus: "I let the team down. I was horrible"."

This sentence seems to be a bit tricky. I would suggest "After the game, Owens commented on his performance before the historic catch saying: "I let the team down. I was horrible". Or something similar.

Reworded. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:27, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Aftermath

Good!

Replay rule change

I made some edits you may wish to review.

Looks good! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:18, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Legacy

Good!

Perhaps adding The Catch III to the List of nicknamed NFL games and plays would be worthwile, especially since it is sourced [39].

Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:22, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Sources

All appear to be pertinent and of acceptable quality.

Images

All are in the public domain.

I will await your review of my comments and edits before posting a final assesment. BigChrisKenney (talk) 07:32, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks BigChrisKenney, all comments addressed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:28, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Final Assessment

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
a (references):

b (citations to reliable sources):

c (OR):

d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):

b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):

b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall: Pass/Fail:

I've checked your changes and all looks above board! Congratulations on another GA! BigChrisKenney (talk) 05:21, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.