Talk:Sunset Park (Brooklyn park)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:00, 25 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "41st and 44th Streets and 5th and 7th Avenues" none of these have articles?
  • They do not. Roads in Brooklyn tend to not be that notable. Epicgenius (talk) 16:19, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
• "and pool.[1] The " just the one citation in the lead is odd, as long as it's mentioned and cited in the main article, no need for that in the lead.
  •  Removed
• "in 1891 through 1905" could we "from 1891 to 1905" instead?
  •  Done
• "the last glacial period" this appears to be capitalised in our article.
  •  Done
• "of New York Harbor; Manhattan; the Statue of Liberty; an" why semi-colons? commas would be fine, right?
  •  Done
• "also a playground at" linked here but not in the lead?
  •  Done
• "facade" link?
  •  Added
• You link brick but not granite....
  •  Fixed
• I believe you have also linked terracotta in other similar articles.
  •  Added
• I think locker room (BritEng: changing room) deserves a link more than swimming pool (BritEng: swimming pool!) ...
  •  Added
• "comfort station" is that a bathroom?
  •  Fixed Yes.
• "A Times" New York variant?
  •  Fixed Yes.
• "60-foot ladders" convert.
  •  Done
• "October 1934.[47][45] " order.
  •  Done
• "Native American" link.
  •  Added
• "WPA funded pools" hyphenated WPA-funded.
  •  Done
• "to open.[50][51][b] It opened " awkward.
  •  Fixed
• "65-foot slope" convert.
  •  Done
• "5.8 million" inflate?
  •  Done
• "only had " ->" had only".
  •  Done
• Refs 68 and 69 need en-dashes, not hyphens.
  •  Fixed I fixed the citations entirely. Epicgenius (talk) 16:19, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
• "., pp. 200–205" spare comma?
  •  Fixed The page numbers were somehow outside the citation template. Epicgenius (talk) 16:19, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

That's it, niff-naff and trivia. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 11:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thanks again. As always I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 16:19, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Jolly good, no qualms to promote this now, nice work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:27, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

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