Talk:Soviet destroyer Opytny/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Hog Farm _Talk 14:21, 29 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:42, 26 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I'll look at this Sunday or Monday. Note: I do not speak Russian. Hog Farm _Talk 03:42, 26 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

That's what Google is for, at least for a couple of pages!--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:18, 26 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Is it worth noting in the body the four-year plan it was ordered under?
" Launched on 8 December, further work was delayed by major problems with" - I think this section of the article needs some re-arranging. The infobox indicates the launching was in 1935, but the placement of this statement after the August 1936 naming makes it appear that the launching was in 1936
It seems a bit repetitive to me to describe the 1940 speed trials in both the construction and description sections
I went ahead and deleted the old revision of the non-free file a few days early just to get that taken care of for GAN purposes and figuring it was non-controversial deletion. Image looks fine otherwise
Sources look fine, although I didn't do spot checks.

Not much to complain about here (the b-class assessment caught almost everything I would have commented on). Good work, shouldn't take much to get this over the line. Hog Farm _Talk 23:52, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 10:25, 29 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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